Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2016 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous! Yay! So glad to see you writing again, even if it's only
a one-shot. I personally love one-shots. I think for the place in
the manga that you inserted this, it's 200% canon, and it was
sooooooooooo good oh my gods. I absolutely adore this much
more realistic take on the whole 'they get separated from the
others, Inuyasha transforms, protects Kagome from the enemy and
then they engage in lovey times' cliche. Like you said, nothing
wrong with those. I've read plenty and they are fun, but
this brave Kagome taking care of transformed Inuyasha just tickles
me. I love 'rise to the occasion, hero Kagome', and while I also
love a good lemon as much as the next girl it wouldn't have been
realistic here so I'm glad you didn't go in that direction. I'm
also glad you had Inuyasha pass out for how she took care of the
actual bandaging, because it would've probably also been pushing
the boundaries of believability had he ended up letting her treat
his wounds, but I think the way you handled his gradual recognition
of her after waking back up was spot on. And all the WAFFy between
them after he turned back, both before and after meeting back up
with the others? Squee! This could so have actually happened. A
perfect canon insertion that does not take the story off into
divergence land afterwards. Well done!
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