| "Finding Venus" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awesome original fic! I really enjoyed the twists and turns. Great job! Bura |
Reviewed By: yoshine On: April 19, 2003 06:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COME ON keep on writing I love this story but I would like to know what feiza is going to do so PLEASE keep on writing |
Reviewed By: Lil Sammy wammy On: April 04, 2003 04:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh i love this fic soo MUCH!! when i first read it was like " wow" soo different AMAZING!! i just hope it gets finshed!! i kept looking all over the net for the next chapters!! and i came here and it said chap 15 i was soo excited!!! i LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOO MUCH!! please PLEASE finsh!!! i cant wait anymore soo excited!! |
Reviewed By: Chris On: March 06, 2003 13:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hay your fan fiction is great please finish it, there are allot of us who want you to finish this its so good and don't be like so many other fan fiction writers and leave it uncomplete Please.
Keep going its fantastic. |
Reviewed By: Pandora666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story i read all of it at once i loved it. i'm so happy that you made nappa the trater i would have been mad if it was vegeta's mom. though that woman does have some sereios issues to deal with. i can not wait to see where you take this story next. though i'm sure frieza and zarbon will return. to see their wicked little plan paly out. |
Reviewed By: Vegeta_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUCH A GREAT FIC!!
Are you still going to continue this fic? Cause you haven't update for a long long time!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!
Anywayz keep up the great work!!
~~God Bless~~ |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 19, 2002 02:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhh MORE!!!!!!!! please *begs really nicely* |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: December 10, 2002 08:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually dislike A/U fics, but this story transcends that delineation. The characters stay in-character, the plot is good, the progression is good, added characters are believeable and surprisingly NOT awkward. This is quite a feat. I am enjoying the h-e-double-toothpicks outta this story! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: nicola-claire88 On: December 07, 2002 02:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellooooo! Are You alive? You haven't updated in ageeees! Please do! |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 24, 2002 02:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love I mean love this fic so far please continue. I enjoy the depth of feeling you have put in the characters and how you can build tension. So please continue as I'm looking forward to it.
*smile* seeya.... |
Reviewed By: see On: October 23, 2002 12:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this fanfic is superb! i have read quite a few in the last few weeks, but this one is defenitly one of the very best. i liked the insight of vegetas emotions, and the explanation why he showed so less emotion.
PLEASE continue it. |
Reviewed By: Spacefille [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 21:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weee!!! Thank you for that lovely fic. :) I'm very new to reading het. fics... (too much yaoi.. -_-;;) and being a women somewhat like Bulma, I could really feel for her. (And Vegeta's mom, despite the fact that she was a traitor!) But I felt for Vegeta as well... and I was very happy with the ending. Or is that not the ending? Come to think of it, probably not... but... wow. :) Oh, and GREAT emotion and character development on the behalf of all the people involved. Once again, thanks so much for this! :D *glomps the writer for good measure* |
Reviewed By: Lady Vegeta On: October 10, 2002 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!When i started reading it i couldn't stop!!!!!!I love it!!!!!!!Really especially that Bulma has power to!!!!I hope there is more to come!!!I can't wait!!!Love and kisses Lady Vegeta |
Reviewed By: NNC On: September 14, 2002 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORED this fic. It was original and incredibly enjoyable. Please PLEASE PLEASE! update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the unique plot line, keep it coming=^.^= |
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