| "Finding Venus" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rascal On: December 10, 2002 08:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually dislike A/U fics, but this story transcends that delineation. The characters stay in-character, the plot is good, the progression is good, added characters are believeable and surprisingly NOT awkward. This is quite a feat. I am enjoying the h-e-double-toothpicks outta this story! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: nicola-claire88 On: December 07, 2002 02:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellooooo! Are You alive? You haven't updated in ageeees! Please do! |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 24, 2002 02:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love I mean love this fic so far please continue. I enjoy the depth of feeling you have put in the characters and how you can build tension. So please continue as I'm looking forward to it.
*smile* seeya.... |
Reviewed By: see On: October 23, 2002 12:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this fanfic is superb! i have read quite a few in the last few weeks, but this one is defenitly one of the very best. i liked the insight of vegetas emotions, and the explanation why he showed so less emotion.
PLEASE continue it. |
Reviewed By: Spacefille [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 21:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weee!!! Thank you for that lovely fic. :) I'm very new to reading het. fics... (too much yaoi.. -_-;;) and being a women somewhat like Bulma, I could really feel for her. (And Vegeta's mom, despite the fact that she was a traitor!) But I felt for Vegeta as well... and I was very happy with the ending. Or is that not the ending? Come to think of it, probably not... but... wow. :) Oh, and GREAT emotion and character development on the behalf of all the people involved. Once again, thanks so much for this! :D *glomps the writer for good measure* |
Reviewed By: Lady Vegeta On: October 10, 2002 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!When i started reading it i couldn't stop!!!!!!I love it!!!!!!!Really especially that Bulma has power to!!!!I hope there is more to come!!!I can't wait!!!Love and kisses Lady Vegeta |
Reviewed By: NNC On: September 14, 2002 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORED this fic. It was original and incredibly enjoyable. Please PLEASE PLEASE! update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the unique plot line, keep it coming=^.^= |
Reviewed By: Pamneris On: September 04, 2002 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW What a great story. I couldn't stop reading it until I was done. You are such a great writer. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: chibic On: September 03, 2002 10:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow~~~!! What a captivating story~ Please write more =) |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider On: August 30, 2002 15:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stop whatever you r doing and please finish this, do u know how many people are dying from anxiety?!
keep going |
Reviewed By: Audreyt26 On: August 26, 2002 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, not just in terms of plot and character development, but originality. Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2002 08:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really quite wonderful. Please continue it. |
Reviewed By: ancara_iii On: August 21, 2002 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Is all I can say. This is a pretty heavy fic. It's great, and the most original thing that I've read in a LONG time, and you write so wonderfully. You really are a very talented author. Can't wait for more! :) |
Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm soo glad that i found this story, now that fanfiction.net have banned NC-17 fics. anyway keep up the good work! i can't wait for the next chapter |
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