| "Finding Venus" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Title: More, please, More!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story on another website but it ended at chapter 14. I was so glad to find an additional chapter here on this site. Please do update soon. This fanfic is so good on so many different levels and it leaves me wanting more. Is there another website where there are more chapters? If you are unable to write more for this story can another writer continue it for you? Please do update soon and keep up the incredible work!!!!
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Title: Patience is a Virtue
Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still patiently waiting for you to update, and I alwys will. I've found some very talented authors with phenomenal stories out there, but for some reason your's is the one I always come back to. I'm not sure how many times I've reread it , but you by far have surpassed the bulk of talent I've seen. I pray you haven't, and don't intend to completely abandon this story. I also hope it never leaves this site, I may want to read it again soon. Most authors either write a good story or a good lemon, it's so hard to find a good lemon in the midst of an intricate storyline. And the characters are believable without being weakened. I too would like to know what has been happening on Earth since Bulma's abduction, as well as Frieza and Zarbon's intentions. So please, don't forget all of us who are dying to finish an exceptional story. And, if you have written anything else I would love to read it, I believe your talent would transcend any subject.
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Reviewed By: yoshine On: February 27, 2004 16:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mother of God will you PLEASE just write another chapter PLEASE PLEASE I'm begging you If you write another chapter I promise I'll review everyday
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Reviewed By: sailolr-scribe On: January 09, 2004 21:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is well developed in craft, plot and character. I love your style because it matches the mood of the story wonderfully. Your choice of words, though sometime are what i like to call SAT words, add to the credibility to the story. Your grammer and varied sentence structure is awesome. The plot is nice, juicy and thick. Just like I like it. It is also a believable plot and storyline, though I am more than curious on to why the others haven't come looking for her, or if you're planning for that to happen. As to character developement, it is comming out nicely. I find all your characters believable, specially Vegita, who can be a hard one to analyze. How do you get into the mind of a man like that without having him come out like a total bastard, which is not fitting for the protagonist, or too whimpy. I like how you show the slow developement of Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. I am glad she didn't go voluntarilly at first; too many fics have her falling in love with him the minute they meet, and she forgets the horrible man he is. But, you show the slow transition between a natural primal attraction to something more akin to love. I can believe she developed those feelings since she also addresses it herself. I love Vegeta's mom, I totally hate and pity her at the same time. That makes her a really cool character. And, I also appriciate the way Vegeta is slowly changing, and did not change overnight. Also, the live changing event was a good way to show why he would change. Love Bulma to death, but lets face it, he needed more provocation than that to change so much in 3 months from the man that did not mind using her while she slept, to the man who would regreted taking advantage of the situation when she seemed to initiate it. Wow, I didn't realize how long this review was. I know you wrote earlier that you had intentions of finishing this fic, and I know how writer's block can be. I hope you can find the inspiration to finish it. I am dying to find out what happens next. From your foreshadowing, I am guessing that the final battle is going to be amazing, and that Bulma will probably turn Super, and earn the respect of his people. This whole story reminds me to a line from Dune, "It is us who they call concubines that histary shall call wives." Happy Hollidays! Nena
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Reviewed By: nienna18 On: July 01, 2003 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I've been following this fic for awhile and I just LOVE it. Please come up with more chapters quickly! How will Vegeta cope with Bulma's desire for freedom? Will he use his new SSJ powers to kill Freeza? Will he conquer his own pride to openly take Bulma as his mate and queen? Please answer these questions!!! |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 29, 2003 01:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i dont suposse your ever going to finish this are you because im vary cureas to see what will happin |
Reviewed By: videl On: June 11, 2003 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
is here moe t the story
if there ispleas write more soon i want to know what hppenso hem and if tey ever fd out shs the key!! |
Reviewed By: Hunny On: May 09, 2003 17:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for you to update for a while now, and though I'd hate you to rush some crappy thing up to appease us all and shut us up. I am dying to find out more, I must tell you of all the fics I have read yours is the best. I continually find myself returning here only to be disappointed. I know how demanding life can be, but please find a moment to satisfy your readers and give us a glimpse into your imaginative genius.
I'm not trying to suck up, I'd just like you to know how impressive your writing style and choice of vocabulry is when any uneducated moron w/a pc can get a website. |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awesome original fic! I really enjoyed the twists and turns. Great job! Bura |
Reviewed By: yoshine On: April 19, 2003 06:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COME ON keep on writing I love this story but I would like to know what feiza is going to do so PLEASE keep on writing |
Reviewed By: Lil Sammy wammy On: April 04, 2003 04:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh i love this fic soo MUCH!! when i first read it was like " wow" soo different AMAZING!! i just hope it gets finshed!! i kept looking all over the net for the next chapters!! and i came here and it said chap 15 i was soo excited!!! i LOVE THIS FANFIC SOOOO MUCH!! please PLEASE finsh!!! i cant wait anymore soo excited!! |
Reviewed By: Chris On: March 06, 2003 13:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hay your fan fiction is great please finish it, there are allot of us who want you to finish this its so good and don't be like so many other fan fiction writers and leave it uncomplete Please.
Keep going its fantastic. |
Reviewed By: Pandora666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story i read all of it at once i loved it. i'm so happy that you made nappa the trater i would have been mad if it was vegeta's mom. though that woman does have some sereios issues to deal with. i can not wait to see where you take this story next. though i'm sure frieza and zarbon will return. to see their wicked little plan paly out. |
Reviewed By: Vegeta_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUCH A GREAT FIC!!
Are you still going to continue this fic? Cause you haven't update for a long long time!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!
Anywayz keep up the great work!!
~~God Bless~~ |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 19, 2002 02:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhh MORE!!!!!!!! please *begs really nicely* |
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