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| "Pleading Truths" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: crystal tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea! Good job, confessor. Very impressive. | Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 12:55 CST
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I really like your story. I can't wait to see you update soon... | Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 19:28 CST
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Whoa, wasn't expecting that! Update soon damnit!!!! | Reviewed By: Susan On: November 02, 2002 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So it was a wolf the whole time...that's what I thought of when the first chap came out but I thought it would be too obvious. Anyway, great chap and a super lemon. I loved Goku's surprise visit, especially when he made the remark about her being naked outside of the GR and then disappearing-lol. Anyway, I can't wait to see how long it takes for Bulma to finds those dragonballs, and what else happens between her and Veggie (hint, hint). | Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: October 17, 2002 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JB: Wowza! That was some lemon girlie!!
Vegeta: *raised brow* Did you expect any less from me?
JB: I could be so mean right now but I'm not because I'm in a wonderful mood.
Vegeta: Oh yeah..why's that?
JB: Cause I've finally found the perfect replacement for you.
Vegeta: *wide eyes* You did?!
JB: Yep! *turns to her right* So hello Mrs. New Co-reviewer.
18: Hello.
Vegeta: But but but-
JB: Ha!! Told you I'd find one!! 18's perfect because she's a female version of you without all the assholiness!!
Vegeta: *grunts and sulks because he is now defeated*
JB: So 18 what did you think?
18: It was a very nice chapter.
JB: YAY!! *hugs a startled 18* You're going to work out just perfectly!! *turns to Kahlan* Ha!! I found one!! One other thing...my first guess was cow...how can that be right?-JB | Reviewed By: S. G. On: October 16, 2002 03:09 CDT
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I agree, it does sound like it could be a kumiho (and the page that talks about the kumiho also mentions the kitsune, and there only seemed to be one page that even mentioned it) ... so i guess i'll have to go with kumiho, too (it's in the same family with the fox and all...)
The other thing I was thinking before is that it could just be a plain old wolf, as opposed to a were-wolf, because before the whole were-wolf legend, that actually came about because they used to think that people turned into wolves at night and ran around doing bad things ... but that is European mythology, not Japanese mythology ... which makes me think it's wrong! (are we allowed to have more than one guess?) | Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn!! That was really good. You really should write more B/V lemons (hint, hint). Well if Veg doesn't turn into a fox I can only think of an animal that even a grizzly wouldn't mess with and that's a wolverine. Those little shits are ballsy and have a serious attitude problem -just like Vegeta ^_^. Oh before I forget, I was gonna e-mail you but I might as well let you know now that when I clicked on your bio page I saw artwork listed that's not yours. This is probably another another one of MMO's fuck-ups. I just thought you should be aware of that. Anywho, great lemon girl, you've got to do this again. TTYL-Sue | Reviewed By: Dragon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 21:16 CDT
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Most likely I am totally off but here it is. My second guess is Vegeta Kumiho?
*Crowd boos*
Random Person: What was that?!
*Gives crowd the finger.*
Dragon Girl: I don't see any of you doing better. | Reviewed By: louie On: October 10, 2002 16:51 CDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what vegeta turnes into!!!!!!!!!!!! Please UPDATE???!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!? | Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 04:58 CDT
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Hi.. Personally, I think this is similar to the Japanese Kitsune legend of fox demons and fox possesion. "In beliefs, myths, legends. and folk tales from the Far East, there can be found a number of were-animals who can change into human form. These include dragons, tigers, wolves, foxes, badgers, and more. The Oriental were-fox is often vampiric. In Japan, the name of the were-fox is kitsune. In China, the name is huli ching.
Even today, there are special Japanese temples to which people, believing themselves afflicted with fox-possession go to for healing. While debilitating physical diseases are often attributed to fox-possession, the person allegedly possessed might have such symptoms as speaking in a voice not his own.
In Korea, the were-fox is much like those of China and Japan, but in some Korean tales it kills its victims outright and eats their livers or bites them and drinks their blood while they sleep."
You said it wasn't a big cat, etc, or I would have guessed about that....there are many Cat possetion/ cat demon stories as well....
And if I did'nt get it right....DARN!!!!! | Reviewed By: Susan On: October 10, 2002 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy I was sweatin' the outcome of that chase, but I'm glad it turned out for the better. Now, why in the hell can't I ever roll onto something that looks that good. It's not fair, Bulma has all the luck :(. Anyway, since Veggie doesn't become a coyote, could he possibly be turning into a fox? I know, I'll probably get a big resounding NO from you but you can't blame me for trying ^_^. Can't wait to read your lemon, so here, let me help you to your desk :D. Good story K. TTYL-Sue | Reviewed By: Susan On: October 07, 2002 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. This chap was great and nauseating at the same time. Poor Bulma, in her attempt to help Vegeta, has now become a possible meal for Yogi. I find it funny as hell that Veg, as hurt as he is, is still thinking about Bulma in her bikini. By the way his injuries remind me of something I saw a few years ago. Desert rat that I am, I decided one summers day to go to Death Valley. Now there's a death wish. It was 125 degrees in the shade. Anyway, while gasping for air under a pathetic excuse for a tree, a coyote ran past me on all threes. Yeah, the poor thing was missing one of his hind legs. It wasn't completely gone but the trap had done enough damage. One of the tour guides told me that it was a common site and that the poor animal would probably kick because of an infection. Anyway, maybe Veggie turns into a coyote. And if he doesn't then you tell me. I've exhausted plenty of brain cells trying to decifer this, so I'm guessed out. Great update. TTYL-Sue | Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 05:34 CDT
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Dang, I thought for sure it was oozaru, modified slightly because of the loss of the tail. Goku wouldn't have had the problem because he'd lost his tail when he was young, but since Vegeta lost his as an adult, his body had been used to the change every full moon. Therefore some physiological shift would still occur, but it would be sized down. Did you know that some gelded stallions still react sexually to mares? ;) It's true!
Anyway, even that doesn't fully fit because true oozaru accompanies an increase in power, not loss of it. I hope you've got a good explanation for why/how 'Geta happened to get this malady... "it just happened" isn't going to cut it, not with the grief you're giving us! ;)
I adore it when Vegeta's vulnerable without being OOC. I am addicted, Must See What Happens Next. | Reviewed By: OujoNoSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GASP!* Moremoremore! Come on, let's go, more more more! I'm getting impatient over here! This is an AMAZING fic! Come on!!! What's wrong with my dear VegVeg?! Bulma, hurry up and find out! Hmm..I think it's got something to do with maybe the moon cycle...wait Piccolo blew it up..CRAP! >_ | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 16:40 CDT
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I've been thinking about this story, and I think I have another idea!
Vegeta: Yes, she leads such an exciting life that she sits around thinking about the DBZ stories she reads on the net.
ssjprincess: Your right, Vegeta, but that's not the point. :)
This story has just kind of stuck with me. I'm dying to figure out what the heck is going on. This story has me captivated!
Anyway, my idea... Vegeta is turning into one of those T-rex dinosaurs that are always running around on DBZ. *smiles at her own brillance*
Vegeta: O_o Onna.
ssjprincess: *still smiling* Yes, Vegeta.
Vegeta: Stop.
ssjprincess: *brow furrows in confusing* Stop? Stop what?
Vegeta: Thinking. Just don't do it.
ssjprincess: *pouts and grumbles* I liked my idea.... he thinks he's so smart... I don't see him making any guesses_
Vegeta: I'm not guessing because I already know.
ssjprincess: *eyes Vegeta skeptically* You do, do you.... then what is it? What are you turning into, Mr. Know-It_All?
Vegeta: *silence*
ssjprincess: Well?
Vegeta: Uh.... I'm not telling you because... because I am the Saiyan Prince! I don't have to if I don't want to! *crosses his arms and scowls*
ssjprincess: Yeaaahh, right. Anyway, Sorry for bugging you Kahlan. I just had to throw that guess into the hat. :)I'll be waiting for an update. | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] |
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