| "Someone to watch over us..." Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 01:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
good chapter as always. :) |
Reviewed By: Heikgan On: August 25, 2002 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved that chapter watches her go to sleep then shows he was awake the whole time typical or what any way i just wanted to say i love your work i wonder who the stalker is honstly i thought it was blaze guess i was wrong .....or was i any way pwease wright more super soon
Ja 'ne |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't even know if I wanna read this one...you killed Geta! Although, you've done a pretty sterling job of redeeming yourself with this chapter...
:::sniffs::::
We'll see. Just keep writing.
Jada |
Reviewed By: Jen Briefs [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't DO! That! GOD I FRICKEN THOUGHT VEGETEA DIED! I WAS CRYING HERE! Then fanfiction.net decided to go down, and I forgot about mediaminer.org so I was crying for over 2 hours. TEASER MY ASS! I thought I was gonna die if I didn't find out the second chapter... Hey, at least Vegeta's alive!! Good way of bringing the story back to life!!! YAY!!! PLEEEEEEEASE keep writing.. please? PRETTY please?
Sincerely,
You know who,
JEN! =P |
Reviewed By: Renee On: August 22, 2002 08:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 18:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thankgod I'm the first to review! Teaser my ass! I'm crying here! You better finish! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: August 23, 2002 08:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still give you all tens for your writing but making everyone think that Vegeta was dead....man that was harsh. I'm so proud of you, tricking people so easily...cough...anyway, can't wait for the next chappie so i can start finding out who the real stalker is. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah! I finished both stories! The rating is for your earlier story and this one, 'cause I figured what good would it do if I reviewed on that one?
OK well, It is really great so far! The only problem I saw were some spelling mistakes and an occansional grammer. Other than that there is nothing you could do to make it better really, well, besides, hmm maybe, UPDATE!
Alrighty well Ja ne for now~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
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