| "Someone to watch over us..." Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2012 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i do hope you finish this on day |
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 31, 2005 13:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow, you are a great writer why is it taking sso long to update this friggin story?!?!??!?!!?!?
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Reviewed By: Maflo On: March 10, 2005 18:28 EST
Comment/Review:
hey well just to tell u i really like this fict so far...i also read the first part: someone to watch over me and i totally fell in love with it lol....its just that i see that u havent updated for a couple of years now so i was wondering if u were planning on finishing writins this fict...i really hope u do (and soon) lol...anyway,keep up the gr8 work, ur a geat writer and PLZ update soon!!!
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Title: That's soooo MEAN!
Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me crying in the last one! I thought you killed him off! That was so messed up. Anyways, I love you for not killing him off! Please update this soon! Grr. I'm still mad because you made me cry! Now I've cried four times in my life! Damn you for being such a good writer! I'm soooo happy Geta is alive! You have no idea! *sigh* Well, I'll review when you update. Cya! ~MistressChaos~
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Reviewed By: RedSwitchBlade On: October 29, 2003 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a rating for both reviews. I really enjoyed reading the first and so far the second story to your original. I don't normally review much so you should feel honored, lol;). Oh yeah, loved the "tease" chapter (sarcasum intended). Anyway, great stories you got going, UPDATE soon, or whenever I can't tell you what to do :)
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Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Don't forget about this story!! It's really good, as was the first one. I really like your timing, throwing in humour to lighten some of the scarier parts. Please don't let this story die. |
Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 09:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, this sequal is really good! Update soon, ok? |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 10, 2002 11:48 EST
Comment/Review:
And it's good!!!!! **rolls eyes** great chapter, I especially loved the marshmallow football!!! **Grins** gotta jet now...**sighs again** I'm in school, i'm bored, and I don't have anything to do |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course we missed you!!!!! It's been so long!! I totally understand your reasons for not writing for a while...I seem to have been going through the same thing myself...anyway enough wallowing....brilliant chappie, great work as always!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter(kat) On: December 10, 2002 11:43 EST
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ackkk!!!! why didn't you tell me you updated!??!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!??!! anyway...**sighs** gotta read the chapter and leave a review now...**sighs again** then i have to come back online tommorrow and upload the colored version of that picture I drew you!! |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome! |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider On: August 28, 2002 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one last thing, never do that again! u scared the crap outta me with that first cptr. please, for the sake of those who couldn't handle going to the 2nd chapter never do that again. (holds back tears) i can't work like this, MORE PLEASE!
that was kinda brilliant yet insane the same. |
Reviewed By: Xtraruffrider@aol.com On: August 28, 2002 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice comeback it's the-just-tell-me-what-happened-at-the-funeral-girl again. u know it wouldn't be safe to walk out ur house with that type of ending so i gonna give u ur props and go. holla at a playa when u see me in the streets |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad when the baby died. So sad, at first I thought it wasn't that bad, but know. So sad. Moving to more happier topics. I like this, and the first one. It took me a LONG time to read it. Keep up the good work, and review faster. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. I'm suitably hooked. I hope you're happy. But you better not try nothin' like that again...or I won't review...ever! (didn't say I wouldn't read, just won't review...lol)
As ever, wonderfully written.
Jada |
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