| "Between Darkness and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: SonjaBlade On: June 30, 2003 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic is great. Nothing's better than a good, well-written crossover, in my opinion. BTW, if you ever figure out what happened to Tetsusaiga's Curse, please let me know. I was reading that one too!
micself@nmsu.edu |
Reviewed By: Jade On: June 20, 2003 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally go in for crossovers or AU fanfics, but in this case, I made an exception. I absolutely LOVE this fanfic. You keep the characters in character more than most AU authors would, and you used an AU theme that related closely to the actual idea behind the characters. I love a fic that shows the hero's softer side, which seems to get deleted quite frequently in the actual anime -- baka japanese men and their standards...
I love the fic. Please write more? ^-^v |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: June 15, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic gets creepier by tha chapter lol i felt so bad for koga. even i dont think he deserved that...but o well... :} lol and inuyasha seems to b so caught up wit his demon/vamp side...wuts up wit that???? its a kick ass fic!! update soon!! i wanna find out wut happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know waht ?? I love your fic !!! it's so unexpexted !! and I love Inuyasha's fierceness...
In other fics, he is always lovey-dovey , with stary eyes ...
Hell no ! Inuyasha isn't taht pathetic excuse for a man !
yeeha, let's go , I'm looking forward the chapter 20 !
... and 21
... and 22
... and 23
... and... more. |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: June 15, 2003 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not done readin it yet but i figured i could review now :P lol anyways I LOVE UR FIC!!! it kix ass! i know i've read some of ur utha ones and im pretty sure i told u they was tight too! |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love all the fics you write! Their just sooo good! I hope that you update soon! |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 10:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this whole Inu Yasha meets Buffy thing it is to cool. Keep up the good work! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: dragonrose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
*pounce* sugoi... wonderful its absoultely wonderful Cataluna |
Reviewed By: ittymonster On: June 11, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a GREAT fic!!! i have read a lot of inuyasha fanfics and i belive this is one of the best. Keep up the good work. I like Buffy is tied into to the story. |
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic. I especially liked the vampire horror thrown in. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is THAT where Kikyou was?!
Some of the word choices are a bit unusual.
The anime Inuyasha fights better when Kag's around, but this one is distracted. It makes sense with a bit of twisting.
So Miroku was once out for vengeance... I am intrigued. |
Reviewed By: Inu-fan On: June 26, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got the charachters perfectly.This the best fanfic I've ever read. Great job. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'd like to add an amendment to my previous post.
Please notify of future updates, or to just email me at....
ssjprincesss@hotmail.com
Sorry, I forgot to do that in the earlier review. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just finished reading this fic through to the latest chapter and I am blown away. This is a splendedly written fic! The plot has left me spellbound. I'm left with a distinct need for more!
Now for the constructive critique... The only fault I found was with your grammer. You seem to have a problem with tenses. It was noticable, but I could correct it myself as I read, so it wasn't to bad. Maybe you could get yourself a beta reader to proof for errors. I could do it if you have no one else, just let me know. Now, the constructrive criticism is over so you can stop hating me. ^_^
Again, I am completely captivated by your story, and hope you update this soon. I am so curious about a few things.... Like, Why is Kikyo so obsessed with Inuyasha? Had they met in the past? Or is she just upset because Kagome is living the life that, she, herself longed for? And what about Souta? Wasn't he brought back to life by Naraku? How is Kagome going to react to that? And will he still blame her for his death? Another thing, who betrayed the exterminators village? UGH!! Do you see! I'm filled with so many questions!! You have to update, so I can fill in the blanks.
I think I figured one thing out though, Kagome is carrying the jewel, isn't she.... ^_^
Update soon!
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story, i just hope you'll update soon. good luck with the rest |
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