| "Between Darkness and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: sammie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! koolio! that was gooood! i lovvvvvved it! great job! -sammie- |
Reviewed By: demon lover On: February 05, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would put 1000000000000000 for originality and enjoyment factor but this thing doesnt go any further
oh and i think that you should go on and tell us how they spent their night toghether like all the others
in other words put some real good lemon scenes in here between kagome and inu yasha |
Reviewed By: Ziana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV YOUR FIC ^.^ pwease update soon...If you don't i'll die from anticipation...and you dont wanna be responsible for that now do you? |
Reviewed By: hey! On: January 29, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must finish this now before i go crazy
and you guys better review |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i know im a dork for using w00t w00t damn my boyfriend for getting me started with that..anywho...id like to say rockin story...it is hot and steamy without the lemon action..i didnt think that was possible..hmm...but u did it..hmm i dont really know what else to say..i felt i had to review because i read ur story..ok well im done now i look forward to the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 10:45 CST
Comment/Review:
the revisions of your chapters changed them alot, and for the better! i thought your story was awesome before, but now it's amazing. in your revisions you're filling in all of the holes that were in your story before. I'm especially glad you went into the character development of Inuyasha some more. You know, though, since you just introduced the character, I don't know what you're going to do with him, but I think you should work on the character development of Miroku. When I read your story the first time (yes it's good enough that i've reread it a few times), I remember thinking to myeslf that you don't go into Miroku that much, you just sort of have him there. Like into his past and such. And especially since you put him with Sango much later, and we know everything about her past (pretty much) Miroku kind of gets cut to the quick, if you know what I mean ^_^
If you want to talk more about this or anything else, email me at onejoy1@pobox.com
Mara |
Reviewed By: Sora and tai forever (to lazy to sign in) On: December 21, 2002 15:17 CST
Comment/Review:
It's great i love it more!i cna't wait for you to update and i can't wait tell inuyash comes on to night!
(it's saturday)thats when it come on...!! |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: December 17, 2002 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha, buffy, blade and blood. this is the most origional story line ever. I absolutly love it. "A++++," continue! I love it! more I/K action, though with a little more detail and passion please. |
Reviewed By: BratG [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 14:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Wai! so great! Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: A.R.T On: December 16, 2002 15:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Really good please hurry up. |
Reviewed By: Chick On: December 16, 2002 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was a very creative story with the whole buffy thing mix!! I really like this story!!! update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
i love what you've done with this chapter
Mara |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
i love what you've done with this chapter
Mara |
Reviewed By: Baby Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like.......... a lot |
Reviewed By: Prince of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. I was just blown away. Really good story. Cant wait for next chapter |
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