| "The Neighbor" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic and great POV!!!! Darn that Yusuke he's so freaking lucky lol! This KuramaxYusuke pairing was the best I've read. Do one in Kurama's POV or maybe even a HieixYusuke lol. Ja.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was awsome ive always loved the idea of a yusuke/kurama pairing but i cant ever seem to find one thank you and hiei working in a porno store not only that but actually knowelgeable on what beginners need
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Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: February 04, 2004 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfics! I don't see that many Yusuke/Kurama couples on the internet so this one is pretty rare. Please write another one on Kurama's POV. Pretty Please?!?!!! Good Luck, Keep Writing!
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Reviewed By: Hitori_no_Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely hillarious. You are very good at embarassing Yusuuke, and you pull off him and Kurama as a couple (which, quite frankly, I'd never thought of) equisitely. ^_~
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Reviewed By: ahorse [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 20:27 CST
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Ch 3! This was great! how about a PWP sequel? Will we ever hear from Hiei again?
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 19:47 CDT
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I reviewed the first part on ff.net, but I hadn't read the second part until now. Both are so amazing!!!!!! It's really in-character too, I can imagine Yusuke talking like that if this was to happen to him. I love yr writing style! The second part really complimented the first, and I'm glad there was a lemon (and a great one, at that!) |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the very very best Kurama/Yûsuke fics I have ever read. Probably b/c you nailed Yûsuke's personality on the head...and the "I don't like guys" denial bits were awesome. :)
Haha...Hiei working in the porno store^^! |
Reviewed By: Saturn On: August 16, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't expect it to be THAT much of a lemon. ::blush:: Oh well. It was good. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
meep... YAY!!! You updated!! It's so great... and Atsuko repeatedly interrupting just sees like something she would do. They're all... so... wonderful *sniff* |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 22:54 CDT
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Ooh. Lemon!!! Haha. Anywho, good chapter. I laughed my bum off. Yuu-kun in the porno store...Hiei as a clerk in the porno store! Too funny. I hope there's more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how many times I've bitched about the ratings not being higher... *sigh* oh well
This was excellent! I normally don't like reading in first person, but you did a really good job capturing Yuuske's personality! Love the fact that he was in denial most of the way through too... hehe
You're descriptions are wonderful to. Always good to be able to visualize a scene...
Oh, and Hiei working at a porno store!! *falls off her chair laughing* Very nice ^_^
Keep up the grand work!! Oh, are you going to write a third chapter? That would rock. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 10:26 CDT
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I liked it a lot! Wow! Just one question, why does Yusuke not react to the fact that Kurama is a fox in human form? I mean if someone told me that I'd think they were nuts. |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 12:35 CDT
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I love this fanfiction, I really do. I just wish you'd write another chapter to it! |
Reviewed By: Kyra On: February 15, 2003 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akari addressed my only complaint, and that's that Kurama is a fox, though I could understand where some confussion may rise, his cute fluffy ears could pass as wolf ears. Other than that, great fic. :3 |
Reviewed By: Pan Pingli On: February 05, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ EEE!!!
Yusuke yaoi is so hard to find, especially uke Yusuke. (Or I'm looking in the wrong place?) But this is the best fic I have read! You wrote the personalities perfectly! I can't wait for more! |
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