| "The Neighbor" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the very very best Kurama/Yûsuke fics I have ever read. Probably b/c you nailed Yûsuke's personality on the head...and the "I don't like guys" denial bits were awesome. :)
Haha...Hiei working in the porno store^^! |
Reviewed By: Saturn On: August 16, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't expect it to be THAT much of a lemon. ::blush:: Oh well. It was good. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
meep... YAY!!! You updated!! It's so great... and Atsuko repeatedly interrupting just sees like something she would do. They're all... so... wonderful *sniff* |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh. Lemon!!! Haha. Anywho, good chapter. I laughed my bum off. Yuu-kun in the porno store...Hiei as a clerk in the porno store! Too funny. I hope there's more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how many times I've bitched about the ratings not being higher... *sigh* oh well
This was excellent! I normally don't like reading in first person, but you did a really good job capturing Yuuske's personality! Love the fact that he was in denial most of the way through too... hehe
You're descriptions are wonderful to. Always good to be able to visualize a scene...
Oh, and Hiei working at a porno store!! *falls off her chair laughing* Very nice ^_^
Keep up the grand work!! Oh, are you going to write a third chapter? That would rock. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot! Wow! Just one question, why does Yusuke not react to the fact that Kurama is a fox in human form? I mean if someone told me that I'd think they were nuts. |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 12:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fanfiction, I really do. I just wish you'd write another chapter to it! |
Reviewed By: Kyra On: February 15, 2003 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akari addressed my only complaint, and that's that Kurama is a fox, though I could understand where some confussion may rise, his cute fluffy ears could pass as wolf ears. Other than that, great fic. :3 |
Reviewed By: Pan Pingli On: February 05, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ EEE!!!
Yusuke yaoi is so hard to find, especially uke Yusuke. (Or I'm looking in the wrong place?) But this is the best fic I have read! You wrote the personalities perfectly! I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Josey On: February 04, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You make them so perfect for each other. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Akari On: January 01, 2003 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice, sides the fact that Kurama is a fox, not a wolf ^^^ |
Reviewed By: Chiyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for you to do more soon |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 14:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Kool. More soon please. |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this fanfic...it was well written and told in true Yuusuke fashion. Kurama and Yuusuke have always been my fav charaters in this series, and you have done them a great justice.....plus they intrigue me.....if they were human...Kurama's crimson, delicate beauty and Yuusuke's dark, sensual masculinity...ahem, anyway, good job, and great story!!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn On: September 15, 2002 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeease do more... like when the moon is full and they can... be complete... Please? It's too good to not have more! |
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