| "Dead Man Walking" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry .. it grab me i got bored.. alos i'm kinda tired i will come back later and tried to read it again |
Reviewed By: TalonH [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 20:44 CST
Comment/Review:
First of all your hook (first paragraph) has run-off sentances. You need to break it up. |
