| "Ben beats everyone in duels" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: ok come on now
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 07:51 CST
Comment/Review:
.....ok...you reviewers are idiots, ITS A FANFIC! ITS NOT SUPPOSE TO MAKE SENSE! WHAT ARE YOU A MORON!!! seriously think about it, hes trying to make it funny, hes a good author, and btw do you guys have any fanfics that are good? well im listening......if not, *cough cough* none *cough cough* then i suggest you shut up, make a fic, and get a life before choosing to share your infinite knowledge with us......idiots. (Boy I sure make an ass of myself dont I?)
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Reviewed By: AngelicDemoness On: April 11, 2003 16:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um...yeah...that was bad...learn how to write before actually posting a story up...and you can't beat everyone that easily...I'll challenge you to a duel..If you dare, email Royfireblade@aol.com... |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh yeah did i forget i'm a better duelist then ben so if you loosers wanna have a real duel duel me at fox67859@yahoo.com but why are you so mean to my friend?! |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT HOW DARE YOU PIMPS TALK ABOUT MY FRIEND BEN LIKE THAT AND IF ANYONE IS GONNA FACE BEN YOU'LL HAVE TO DUEL ME FIRST FIND MY ADRESS AT FOX67859@YAHOO.COM PIMPS HOW DARE YOU TALK THAT WAY ABOUT MY PAL!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SilverWolf315 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Apparently, you are about as good at Duel Monsters as you are at writing. I've read many terrible fics, but yours was by far the worst. Next time learn to duel before you write any more fics
on this topic. Why would you write something like this anyway? Your self-esteem that you have to write a fic where you beat non-existant characters at a game you don't know how to play just to
feel better about yourself. |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 13:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
uhhh... NO COMMENT.. YOU DON'T PLAY THE REAL WAY!! THAT IS NOT THE REAL WAY YOU PLAY DUEL MONSTERS! THE TV SHOW IS WRONG! THE RIGHT AND REAL WAY IS TO PLAY BY TRIBUTES AND OFFERINGS AND SACRIFICES!!! AND MAYBE TYPES!!! I CHALLENGE YOU TO A REAL DUEL!! NO CHEATING! ONLY TRIBUTES AND NORMAL SUMMONS AND RIGHT FROM OUR DECKS!!!! IF YOU DONT KNOW WHAT THE HECK I'M TALKING ABOUT, YOUR LOSS! I CHALLENGE YOU!! AND IF YOU DONT HAVE A REAL DECK WITH CARDS, GET A DECK!
-Brockiepoo15 -PikaRppr1@aol.com |
Reviewed By: none On: August 26, 2002 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
You didn't make it hard to beat them. You kept stealing everyone's monsters on their field
and use it win. You beat Tea in one hit! Which wasn't possible. The Dark magician has 2500 atk points
and the pitit angel has 1300 atk points so the Dark magician would have only took 1200 life points. And
you wouldn't end up rich by defeating all of them so poorly. |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2002 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ben you make this too easy and that was my mirror force remember i wish i could beat them easier and get rich but no see ya ben |
