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Title: LOL! ^_^
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Lol! THIS IS FANTASTIC! ITS JUST SO FUNNY!!! I REALLY LIKE IT EBCAUSE ITS SO SILLY AND FUNNY!!! Lol! Well done! Keep it up! Even if you are like 'under age' ne? Lol! Make sure you make more and make them funnier! Thanks for a dead funny read! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms xxx ^_^
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Sukasana On: February 26, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was feaking hilarious. Heh, I'm WAAAAY underage to be reading these (coff, 12 1/2 coff) and I know More about sex than that. And I've been caught writing lemons in my school notebook lol lol.... :)
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Reviewed By: TLN On: January 12, 2005 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is few things funnier than a well-written MST. Well this one I loved, thanks for giving me the laugh of today.
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Reviewed By: Okami_Kitakazeno [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pardon the terminology, but screw politeness in this case! The lemon was terrible beyond all reason content-wise. I'm not even going to comment on the grammar, spelling, or punctuation. The MST was very well done, I thought, and you scored points just for pointing out one simple thing: Sakura and Sayoran are only ten years old. How can anyone not find that to be a major fault in the "story." I won't even aknowledge the fact that this girl is/was planning on writting a ChibiusaXDarien fic... Ick...
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Reviewed By: Selena Fuentes On: April 25, 2004 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Laughing uncontrollably* That lemon was HORRIBLE! Loved the MSTing though. My god, what in the hell possessed a thirteen year old to write a lemon? I guess it shows a lot about the youth of America nowadays. -____-; I almost wish I could tell thier parents about what the hell they wrote. *shudders* This is enough to make me want to beat myself over the head repeatedly with a frying pan. However, I endear you to write another MST. This was one of the funniest I've read in a while. *My husband is staring at me funny and asking what the hell I've been snickering so hard about.*
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Reviewed By: ! On: January 28, 2004 21:46 CST
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First of all, your comment were cruel. Second, was that story made in a parody/humor spirit or was she actually writing something serious, because there is just no bloody way someone is actually writing that way. I don't care about the grammar, but come! one! Are we talking about the same show?
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Reviewed By: Death~sama On: January 25, 2004 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful MST. I think, that if someone is going to write a lemon, it must be believeable and have some legs to stand on. First off, I'm a HUGE fan of CCS and know the series inside and out. (I have all 70 episodes in Japanese) and I play Go alot. And I don't have problems with MSTs cause our fics aren't protected by copywrite or anything. 'Sides, they're funny as hell. And a rule of thumb, "If you don't want to be flamed or have your story messed with, DON'T WRITE AND AWFUL STORY!!" -- When I see your face, it makes me want to puke
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Reviewed By: PenguinPocky On: December 12, 2003 08:18 CST
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You made me laugh out loud! Now my friend is looking at me like I'm completely insane. The only thing I have a problem with is that you mentioned the age...I've been writing lemons since I was 12 and they were much better than what that girl wrote. Still, great MST, the comments were hilarious. I might have to sue you for making me nearly choke to death though. ^^
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Title: A Clanner that has read this is fic before
Reviewed By: Locke of the Watch On: December 06, 2003 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, after I first found this fic and read(I hate my bad spelling ability) this fic, I was dumbfounded for at least three days trying to figure out how a 13-year old knows this much about sex. Reguardless, I wrote a review that has never been shown on the site that hosted the fic, most likely a good call by the webmasters because of the the... how do you say that you wrote a review that would send all readers away from the facfiction in Japanesse. And my rating are a combinion of the MSTer and the PSS author.
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Reviewed By: carpetfibers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness; this was the first CCS MST that I've read, and I received more than one odd look from my dear roommate for laughing out loud. Of course though, that's not a rare thing... I looked to see if you've done more of these for CCS, and sadly, I found none. I have wiped away the tears, and am now endeavoring to entreat you to writing yet another one. May I suggest a title to belittle and crumble into tiny bits? Rather than wait for the permission, "The Loving and Loyal Girl" needs to be crucified. I have never read such bad writing in all my life; this is yet another lemon/horrific writing fic written by one who has yet to probably reach puberty. It needs derision- and humorour derision at that. Right well, here's to hoping that you will! Ja.
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Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok now _ that _ was funny!! very interesting and i'm dying to know is that actually something someone wrote? if it is EEp! how could a 13 1/2 year old write that? O.o; i can't take it but seriouly i was funny ^-^ |
Reviewed By: A very disturbed person On: June 20, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Screw being nice and respecting this person's fic. IT SUCKS! I love the way you ridiculed and mortified this abomination. I was about to die of laughter after reading about the two dicks. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Yue Xumeragi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll try to be objective here.
First off, the fic was realy great, and I liked the comments.
Then again, you shouldn't do that to someone's else fic. I realy much doubted you had permission, but having it would be just cruel.
Anyway, speaking of myself, I liked it. Even if it's "not nice", that's the point of MST fics, it was in the summary, poeple knew what they were getting themself into, they shouldn't complain about it afterwards.
Finaly, in the fic you did some mistakes. First off, there IS a sweet card, beleive it or not. (hopefully only in the anime. Also, liek someone already said, go is a japenese game, complicated but that was rather a pointless detail in the story nobody cared about. For the bad spelling and everything, maybe you shouldn't criticize that much, she -was- only 13 years old, with everything that implies (a LOT).
Now, excuse my bad english (it's not my first language) and myself as I go trying to find that author's site on the net, to see if she improved.. okay, no, actualy, it's only to have a nice laught. |
Reviewed By: hteraj On: June 10, 2003 16:16 CDT
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*sits dumbfounded* wow this is the third MST I've read before and the previous two were pieces of crap! but this is hilarious write another one please!
may writers block be infinitely blasted from your mind (may you never get writers block{for the less educated like me hteraj's other personality}) |
Reviewed By: Blood Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATED the lemon but I loved the MST. But what I don't get is if you SAY it's a lemon and rate it that why do people say it'sbad? I mean you warned them so it's THEIR own falt damn it. Ver funny fic. Wanna see another MST. Did Steven ever kill/catch the peroid eating fuzzy brown thing? I'd really like to write a fic with you. My e-mail's Nophonenow@aol.com as well as ashleylannette@aol.com
Ja matta ne |
Reviewed By: Boopy On: April 30, 2003 19:41 CDT
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That's odd. When I first came to this page today, my review was gone....but now it's there. Oh well. O_o; |
Reviewed By: Boopy On: April 30, 2003 19:40 CDT
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Aw...My review is gone fer some reason. ;_;
I LOVE this MST. I was laughing so hard I nearly vomited. |
Reviewed By: Boopy. On: April 29, 2003 19:54 CDT
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Hmmmm...Mmm-hmm...
-gets out a shotgun and shoots herself in the head- |
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