| "A Place to Run" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: July 22, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good and yes it dose have a kichen if you remember when goku left for namik mr.breefs said he was done with evry thin and then listed them |
Reviewed By: Tifa Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DONE!!! What do you mean DONE!? Your not finsh!! What happens now!! I though this was a NC17 so where does that start!! YOU MUST FINSH!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 12, 2002 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story's great so far please PLEASE complete it. I love how they've been forced to spend some private time together, oh and also Bulma sleep talking.
well I'll keep reviewing so keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Moreeee....must have morreeeeee |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 31, 2002 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Oh, Bulma asked for Veggie's help to fix the bot and he's gonna actually do it. Could it be that Bulma's dream is about to come true? Can't wait for the next chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 29, 2002 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Bulma's dreaming about Veggie...I wonder if she's dreaming about something that's gonna happen. Good chap but I need more ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Gamesw3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry and finsih!! i want to know the ending |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 26, 2002 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. They haven't killed each other...yet. Poor Bulma, all nice and clean and no clothes to wear. Good chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 25, 2002 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks promising. Lucky Bulma, she's gonna have to spend at least 2 weeks locked in a ship with Veggie. Some girls have all the luck. |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 25, 2002 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!! I want to know the ending!!! |
Reviewed By: avarinnia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2002 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it it is so funny PLEASE CONTUNE |
Reviewed By: Christina On: August 24, 2002 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!I just love this story!Pleasse write more! |
