"When No One Care" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: sailorrikku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 20:40 CDT Comment/Review: Thank you for makeing a very good fanfic and If you do update e-mail sailorrikku |
Reviewed By: Night On: September 02, 2002 19:18 CDT Comment/Review: oh its so sad! and not watery. i hate when people try to water hiead down *runs and pours a bucket of water on hiead's hear* See! It doesn't work!
Hiead: You. Die.
Well, now that I'm done making my point...I'm going to erm...RUN *runs as fast as her legs can carry her* |
Reviewed By: Night On: September 02, 2002 19:18 CDT Comment/Review: oh its so sad! and not watery > |
Reviewed By: kio87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 14:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: oh, very good. i mean, very very good! *makes mental note not to think of this at night time, or she'll have very depresnig dreams or cry...* *.* keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2002 20:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is good. I'd run this through a grammar check though.
Steve Jester |