| "Little Inu Yasha" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shiari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyo... this is really cute so far... but I have a couple suggestions.
One... if your computer has a spell-chech you should use it...
Two... since some words are wrong, though spelled correctly, I suggest you get a beta-reader. That ways they can double check everything and suggest things that need improvement.
I beta for several people already... but I'm more than willing to go after your fic, if you wish it. |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
that is so Kawaii! i can totally imagine that! a chibi-inuyasha! aaaaaaaaaaw
*picks up Chibi Inuyasha and starts sqeezing him*
Soo adorable!
Keep on writing! i want to know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Keade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
i realy like it.. ihope you write more soon |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: December 18, 2002 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want a little Inuyasha! *thinks how cute the older one is and changes mind!* Very funny and sweet. |
Reviewed By: yushiemie On: December 17, 2002 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo funny,but i bet i can guess who`s watching them,but i'm not gonna say.pleez get the next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: yushiemie On: December 17, 2002 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo funny,but i bet i can guess who`s watching them,but i'm not gonna say.pleez get the next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Myst: Oh he's so cute. *hugs little Inu Yasha*
Trio: Ha ha he got turned into a little kid.
Myst: So did you trio. Remeber when you bothered hammy.
Trio: Grrr...
Myst: Anyway, please continue. This needs contiued. Kay. Thanx. |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:11 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE! THIS SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME! |
Reviewed By: Mei On: August 31, 2002 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUUUTTTTEEE!! Write more! I want to see how Inu-Yasha and Kagome deal with this!! |
Reviewed By: M On: August 28, 2002 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. i thought it was sooooo cute. |
Reviewed By: animealam On: August 27, 2002 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is starting to be really interesting, I like it so far so I hope you write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Funny Bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE Chibi fics, please continue. |
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