| "The open Window" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! *this is actually Ally Young... i just call myself Inu_Yashas_gurl now...* Whens the next chapter comin' out? I cant wait!!! *hugs Nikki and Tenameru* I love your story so far! |
Reviewed By: Qserenity On: September 10, 2002 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
WEeeeeeeeeeeeeee This is so GOOD!!!! OMG I loved this chapter!!!! I absolutly adored it Kendal!!! It rocked!!!! Once we finish all these little fics I'm gonna print 'em out and put them into order!!! Like our own little series!!!! ^_^
1. the open window!
2. Staff of healing
3. Key of creation and so on.... Thats how I envision the first three at least. ^_^
I CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ME CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: oni-link [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 16:48 CDT
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Waaaaaaaah Kendal you're such a great writer! I loveeeeeeeee the story!!!!!!!!!!! (Uhm, well, I love all the Tenanikki stuff, you know)... You're graeat, can't wait to read next part!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 You're soooooo great!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kendal_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 10:02 CDT
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I did call poor tena Karzon!! I am really baka! I think I did that twice and Nikki corrected me the frist time. Grrr...oh well don't try and type with Lady_Nikki yapping in your ear! :D thanks for pointing that out Sick Liittle Fiend I will go change that now!!!
~Kendal |
Reviewed By: Sick Liittle Fiend [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2002 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really good chapter! I love this story! The only problem I noticed was once you called Tenameru 'Karzon.' |
Reviewed By: Legolasofthewood [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 01:34 CDT
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you did such a good job, phenomenal writing style! I can't wait to read the next part!!! |
Reviewed By: Ally Young On: August 29, 2002 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story so far. Its kind-of a sad begining, but I think it will be a really good story.
~Ally Young~ |
Reviewed By: Sick Liittle Fiend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooooh! This is really good! You have a very nice style of writing! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Qserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This was superb Kendal!!!!! You are truly a superior writer!!! This is wonderful!!! The desciption, detail, and plot!!! All Wonderful!!!!
P.S. I don't rate grammer... I have no grammer skill so I Should not judge amothers!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady_Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love!!! very coolness Kendal!! now me go tell the others you psot the frist part!!! weeep weep!!!! Yetta Nikki and Tenameru!!!!!!!! :D |
