| "Saiyan Elite 04: Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 28, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ryoko™ On: September 10, 2002 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you should use some flash backs somewhere inside you fan fic to allow the reader to know what happened to the friends of Kakarott. Your fan fic starts at the end of a battle and we get to find out that he had some friends, but it might be interesting to get to know your Kararott character as who he was before he was taken away. |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien On: August 30, 2002 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
uniqe story...I love it! |
