| "Passions Victims" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: surtgr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT..... write more... I'm addicted :) |
Reviewed By: Baguette Pamplemousse On: October 11, 2002 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, I see you changed Mary Sue's name to Ariel. |
Reviewed By: Empress Ling-Pha On: October 10, 2002 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sequel shouldn't exist--the first was best where it ended. Oh well. This person is a pretty decent writer but needs to get some help with grammar and lemons. |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2002 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Could you be any more amazing?! yoy have the writting gift. pls pls pls write more to passion victims, im itchin to know whats happens!!! |
