| "Isis heart broken" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Bla.Bla.Bla On: October 25, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good A litte bit sad Write More Good Fic
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Reviewed By: Sakura22 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
THis is pretty sad...it's a bit short but sad. I don't know who Isis is (AHH STUPID CRAPPY DUBS DOESN'T ANYBODY SELL MANGAS NTO ON THE INTERNET AHHHHHHHHHHH) okay so I did like it. I have a general idea of who Isis and Malik are, but other than that I'm blank. I can guess though (AHH STUPID WB I WISH YOU WERE SMAT ENOUGH TO JUST SHOW THEM ALL AND NOT MAKE ME WAIT WEEKS UPON WEEKS FOR NEW EPS) okay now that my anger is out I'm gonna go now...
::walks up to Bakura who is holding a knife inches away from his wrist, steals it and slices her own wrist::
I HATE THE WORLD!!!! ......
Bakura: O.O It worked...nothing to be afraid of. ::slices his own wrist:: See? I-
(can anybody see that the world is totally mixed up? It sucks and people need to take better care of it...nite the contries so that Japan will send us animes sooner...) |
Reviewed By: setobessed On: September 01, 2002 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool fic. |
Reviewed By: Yami Chibi Anzu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh..I know Christine(UltimaWitch89),I made mistakes I reread it 4 times,but I'm too lazy to get of my f****** a** to fix it x_x I will..later on..o_O; anyways,I almost got my idea for my next fic from your fic(not really) and the Wiccan book I'm reading...uh..Ja^-^ |
Reviewed By: UltimaWitch89 On: August 31, 2002 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i only gave a nine cause i'm cheap...NOT, it's good, just some grammar mistakes...HEAR THAT??? YOU ARE GRAMMATICALLY INCORRECT!!!!! *friends bonk on head with huge mallet* Owww... @_@ anyway, good fic. but just one question, Isis is one of the villains? I thought only Malik was...not her too...(and yeah...answer that question later when you get back online you lazy head) |
