Reviewed By: Commenter On: September 02, 2002 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem like quite the little braggart. It would be quite a good story if you would tone down your character, Ethanyos. You make it seem as though he is the smartest person alive. Give him some lead way. Its not that 'fun to read' when the main character is the best at everything. Characters must have faults. |
