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| "You Better You Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: YamiSukui On: January 25, 2005 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I have to say I am a big FF fan and know a good fic when I read one and yours is VERY good! Congrats! And you were right, not many writers approach their romance this way. The only reccomendations I would have to make are to add a little more depth to your descriptions, even for well known characters and places like those in the FFX universe it can make a world of difference. Rikku, Auron, and Kimahri are very In Character but the others seem a bit neglected in comparison, not that they aren't nicely done themselves. It's really too cute! I can just imagine the groups attempts to "help" their friends. Please update soon, yours is one of the few fics that I wouldn't mind reading over again later.
| Reviewed By: Galatea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very cool, I'm enjoying this a lot. You seem to have all the characters down really well. I'm not generally a big AuronxRikku fan, but this is a really enjoyable read! Please write more soon. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Maru On: September 19, 2002 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
My this is funny! Auron's a little bit cruel though, but it's still fun XD |
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