| "Crossing Lines" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: filiasan On: March 18, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so hard to find a good story these days (fake laugh)...at least for Orphen So, keep them coming (especially a sequel to this one; I see the beginnings of a BEAUTIFUL series!)
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
great job............sequel, sequel!!!
I can't find any decent Orphen pics on the net either. :P |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm . . . i like them, but i tend to think you portray Orphen as a little to rough and violent than he really is, IMO. I would like to know Orphens reasoning behind these lessons, since they are obviously not b/c Orphen loves him or anything (Orphen's action would be different if he did). I would like to see Majic really blast Orphen a good one though, when Orphen gets too rough. Just b/c he can't break the bonds doesn't mean he can't use his majic and i think Orphen needs to be taught a lesson as well . . . "not to underestimate" . . . :) Anyways, good job! I'd like to read more! :) |
Reviewed By: Super Saiya-jin Black Wolf Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, me likey!! The two best characters in th Orphen Series gettin it on!! WooHoo- a sequal is a must!! |
Reviewed By: James Michael Ellis (a.k.a Timber Wolf) On: September 03, 2002 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!
A sequel MUST be done!
Orphen stories are such a rarity to find. |
