| "Where am I?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: animej [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! ;;_;; CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!! Could you write more? ^-^;;;;; This is GOOD!!!!! ^______^ -animej |
Reviewed By: Yume no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is interesting enough to draw my attention. I personally kinda think that Sesshomaru is talking a little too much, but it's your fic. Overall, I enjoy it.
I would also like to make a suggestion: The paragraphs are a little grouped together. Could you please space out the speaking lines into different paragraphs?
Good luck with school ^^, if you could, please e-mail me when you update, otherwise, I will miss updates.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 10:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, good. I can't wait for the next. Update soon!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Write more!! I think this is very well done! |
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooooooo longness XD!!!!!!!! You must continue this!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's REEEEAALLLLY interesting and I wanna know what happens next!!!!!! WRITE THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Promising story so far, but one tip, make the chapters longer pleaze oo;;;;;;... With chapters that short it might draw some people out of it^^;;;;;; It's still a promising start like I said before and you write pretty well too, so it's most likely gonna get more reviews than mine^-^
Well, everything else is fine to me, so I'll leave it in your hands to continue this^_~ |
