| "A different World" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Bo On: August 01, 2003 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT was interesting but maybe u should have explained the new charactors or why bulma and vegeta were in hell |
Reviewed By: Jennifer On: October 15, 2002 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you type your characters' speech is confusing, and you jumb subjects alot. It's confusing and your writing is a little weak. The story doesn't cath on well. |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: October 02, 2002 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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boggles the mind.... i want more!! |
Reviewed By: Darkmoon On: September 06, 2002 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fascinating absolutely fascinating..wonder where they're going to end up? Hopefully not on some alien planet that has creatures out to kill them...that would be wrong. |
