| "Wicked Little Town" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nicee continue ASAP |
Reviewed By: VOM On: January 17, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh heh~
It's Voice of Mystery, from ff.net! *kicks ff.net in the supposed balls* No NC-17 stories...*starts bawling*
I changed my name 'cause the last one was...stupid...
Well...I'm rooting for Seifer...*appears with little pom-poms* GO SEIFER! S-E-I-F-E-R! GO SEIFER!
What can I say, Seifer is the love of my life...*big romantic sigh* He's sooooo hot, even if he's just pixels on a screen...*melts into a big pile of mushy stuff*
*reforms body* I hope Seify can get Squall into bed... *hentai grin* ....they CAN NOT be just friends....please...don't make them just friends..
Keep Writing
*~*VOM*~* |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, even though its sad, I just hope Squall will come through. (I've always been a sucker for Seifer XD) He's the coolest character in the game (not to mention the hottest) but, I like it even though you've been brutal to him in the first few chapters. I hope to see more chapters up. Good job! ^_~
~*EnchantedAngel*~ |
Reviewed By: Ceranja On: October 16, 2002 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's great that this fanfic it here now! ^_^ I used to read it in ff.net and it was so horrible when i couldn't do it anymore!
Write more, please!!! |
Reviewed By: MelAngel On: September 18, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style of writing... the way you let the words flow from one idea to another. Too many authors write in a choppy manner, using childish collections of words. It makes it sound like either they're 9 years old, or they don't have a handle on english.
There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing so major that it takes away from the fic itself. I can't list them here just yet, but you can email me at eloquentintent@aol.com and I'll fetch the fic, re-read it, and mention what I found.. if I can re-find them. ^_^
I enjoyed the fic greatly, and am looking forward to the next chapter. I love how Squall doesn't go for Seifer right away, that it's a fight to win the man's affection... too many people have them just bam.. hooking up. Though I do hope they end up together eventually. Having Squall go through the emotions of discovering how he truly feels.. it's a good idea.
Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Cosmic_Kilia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
NO! IT CANT END THERE... can it?? ... I guess it can. Oh well. Please update! I love the description and everything! The story line is great. Keep up the good work!!
~@~ Kilia ~@~ |
