| "When love and hate collide" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 21:34 CST
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Great job on this chapter! I'm totally loving this. Didn't expect that ending either. Now what's gonna happen. I'm SOOO anxious to read the next chapter. REALLY hope you update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW MAYUN!!!!!! You gotta finish this before I spontaneously combust......this is killing Trunks.......but man you're an awesome writer!!! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 15:14 CST
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WAAAHHHH!!! =D It just gets better and better, don't it? Have I mentioned how much I LOOOVE this story and how much I LOOOVE you?!? XD lol!!! Please update ASAP!!!! Oh, and by the way!! I'm working on a piccie of Leilani, so don't think that the Goten pic was the only one I was gonna draw for ya!!! =D Ja!!! ^_^V |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 01:17 CST
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Ahh!!! You forgot my email reminder! I was lucky enough to be bored out of my mind...No offense JB...hehe...When I clicked over here to see if you had updated, and you had!! WOOHOO!!! As always, great chapter. Only one more to go? Well, as long as it's a good one and you start something else for us to read, I guess that's okay. Hope you have better luck with your computer in the future. Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: November 03, 2002 17:00 CST
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Cliff hanger **Dies**
Damn it, hurry up! IF trunks kills himself, dont 4get bout the dragonballs, **sing-song tone** ~they can bring him Back~
lol...nice plan Goten, lets hope it works |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 23:35 CDT
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That was such a sad ending! I can't wait to read what's next! I can't wait for Trunks and Goten to be together and happy forever! This story is great! I guess that's all for now...I have a ton of work to do...Test and homework due in Cal III tomorrow...ewness...Laterz! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 15:45 CDT
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NOOOOO!!! Don't leave Torankusu-kun, Goten-chan!!! NOOOO!!!! *sniffles and sobs* That was beautiful!!! You did great!!! MORE MORE MORE ASAP!!! =D
~*Hisaki*~
PS: I'll be sending you those pics soon, don't worry!! I'm working on them!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo hoo!! You go girl! I finally picked this back up and I'm glad I did. This has GOT to be one of the best fics I've EVER read. So full of angst. I totally LOVE it! And this last chapter!! Oh my gods! WHAT a lemon! I was out of breath! I'll never get to sleep now! Good going. ^^ I can't wait for you to update!! You're gonna update soon right? RIGHT?! This is definitely going on my favs list. ^^ Keep up the great writing!! Update update update!! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 21:10 CDT
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Um...yeah...A whole chapter long lemon. For your first yaoi lemon, I think you did pretty well. What I liked were the Japanese words you used. I don't have much time right now, but I hope to be back soon to read more. Until then Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 02:28 CDT
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Okay, first off, my heart is aching now from the ending of this chapter...wow...This is so sad and touching. You are really great at painting a picture with words. The imagery is unreal. You did do one thing that is a pet peeve of mine lately. Towards...The "s" bothers me. Don't ask, long story. There were a few other typos, but who am I to complain? I make a ton of them. I am really enjoying this story though. I thought the scene in the field was cute with Vegeta getting flowered, and Goku's reaction was so adorable. I have a request I'd like to make. Please email me when you update. I have a hard time keeping up with the fics I really like because of my busy schedule. My email is "marvaughan83@yahoo.com" Thankies! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! This is so great! I love it! |
Reviewed By: PK On: October 12, 2002 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I totally love your fic. At frist I was like 'Trunks you F&^kin' BASTARD!!' But then I was like, 'ohhh, poor Trunks'. Your doin' a great job, I love it. Please update soon.
Princess Kitana |
Reviewed By: Rookie1166 On: October 10, 2002 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to read the rest of it! A friend of mine sent it to me and we both aren't too cool on Yaoi but i decided to give it a shot. I've read it this far and I'm finding myself checking every day to see if it's been updated! |
Reviewed By: shader On: October 05, 2002 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Youve got me hooked on this please write more it was a let down when father mcruary ended his dbz cop fanfic please write more dis is a good one its cool goten has a kid but all of them together/ what about krillin and 18 leave them as a couple please or are you gonna post something like 18 walks in with videl or krillin and some guy they are my fave couple please leave them be but a pan/marron couple wouldnt hurt. I LOVE THIS FANFIC MOST OF THE STUFF UPTHERE IS MINDLESS DRIBBLE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: HunBun111 On: October 05, 2002 10:37 CDT
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Well that was interesting. Is it finished or ru gonna write more? I liked it. But I don't think Goku and Vegeta are a good couple at all. The thought makes me kinda sick! Gohan or Piccolo either! I thought that they said Nameks were asexual so how does Gohan know what he is with! Lol well PEACE |
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