| "When love and hate collide" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheRedButler On: September 15, 2002 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kewl story. Come out with part 7 ASAP, please. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 02:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whurf! Now that's a lemon. Goten displays very good judgement. You have my accolades and praise! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story!! Please, you HAVE to finish it ASAP!!! =D Please e-mail me when you do update? My e-mail is Hisaki_Kurai@yahoo.com I'd appreciate it so much!!! Thanks!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 12:38 CDT
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*cries* Why did Trunks do that to poor Goten-kun??? Noo!!! *sniffles* I hope this gets better, cause right now I'm all hurt and upset!! Trunks would never do that!!!
But anyway, it's your story, let's play it by ear and see where this is heading... |
Reviewed By: ~*Lynn*~ On: September 12, 2002 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyment factor: 20!! I love it!! You HAVE to update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 00:01 CDT
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Correction. I love that Goten has a daughter.
Still waiting.
Jada |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic. I love that Geta and Goku are an established couple. I love that Goten has a son. I think Trunks-kun is out of his mind, beating Goten to death's door like that? But I think you're gonna explain it real soon right?
Right.
Waiting. XD
Jada |
Reviewed By: Midnight Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trunks is a jerk I hope Vegeta beats some manners into him. You don't beat up a person in front of their young child its wrong. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 07:25 CDT
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Hmmm... never woulda taken Trunks for a homophobe. Besides that, the fic is very interesting so far, you've got me hooked as a regular reader.
Please Ma'm, may I have some more? ;) |
Reviewed By: Hisaki (Not Signed In) On: October 17, 2002 08:30 CDT
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OMG That was the best!!!! =D I loved it!!! Can't wait for more!!! WRITE A SEQUEL WHEN YOU'RE DONE!!! This is the greatest yaoi lemon story EVER!!! ^_^
~*Hisaki*~
PS: I'm at school right now so I'd make this longer and rant about how this is the best story, but I dun have time o.o;; ^_^;; Heehee...Piccies coming at ya soon!! =D |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 17:12 CDT
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Another great chapter! I loved it! You've got to update soon! Don't tell me you're going to make it a Romeo and Juliet senario. Goten leaves, then Trunks kills himself and when Goten finds out HE kills himself literally. That'd be awful! Don't do that to us fragile readers! We can't take it! Ahh! The madness! Anyways, you're doing a really good job keeping this updated. The writing is awesome. I'm so caught up in it! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is it's now almost 2am and I'm about to pass out from exhaustion due to the hour and having what I believe to be the flu, but I couldn't go to bed without reading all you had written.
Damn, this is a good fic. I can't get over how involved it is and how mean Trunks is. Well, part of that is most likely due to the fact that I'm writing a story right now where he's just the opposite, but that's the beauty of fanfics. We put the characters in different situations and have them react in whatever way we feel best, uncovering a new side to not only the character, but ourselves as well.
I can't wait to read more on this. I hope you update soon. This fic is really great. I feel so sorry for poor Goten, and Goku and Vegeta are too cute! I can't get over how to make Goku be quiet. Well, like I said, it's late and I'm sick and tired, so I guess this is the end. See you on the next chapter. Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Megami Shine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 22:10 CDT
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OMG im crying ur soo good please keep writing |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....need...more....very, very, very good..... |
Reviewed By: Yaoi Mistress Little Washu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone needs to beat some sense into Trunks! Poor Go-kun! I hope Vegeta knocks some sense into Trunks. |
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