| "Charango" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Justin On: June 21, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story very much and hope that you will continue your writing. To be honest the only problem I have is your style of writing. I'm sure you have your reasons for writing like that and I don't mean to offend you in any way, but that style of writing with the 'if's' doesn't work well. To most professional authors you would sound like a writer who's just started out. I'm not sure if you are just starting out or not but that's what people will get the impression of you. Again, I'm not a professional writer either but I know that's how people look at that type of style. Again I don't mean to flame you or anything like that because I honestly like your story very much. I commend you for your originality, and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Tori On: June 21, 2003 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found everything great, but the grammar and stuff wasn't as good as the author probably could do. I'm just saying that if the author put more effort into spelling and grammar they could earn an 11 if they tried. Other than that, it's a wonderful start to a wonderful story. Great so far, can't wait to read more.
-Tori |
Reviewed By: megami riley On: December 02, 2002 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
heys! ^__^ I like this ficcie! ...but, where's the rest of it? I need to know what happens! |
