| "Battle of Light and Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: link hero of time On: March 17, 2004 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thi is the best ficever !!!!!!!! Post next chapter a.s.a.p.!! Thanks ,link
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Reviewed By: Aileen [Mediaminer Member who's too lazy to get off her butt and login] On: September 20, 2003 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is good, and I don't even play Fire Enbelm. Keep going! |
Reviewed By: Forever Yours [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was a great story. I wish I could read some more. Keep on writing! Your on a roll! |
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good, keep adding chapters! |
Reviewed By: Weengs On: September 07, 2002 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fic!Make more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Sammie \m/ >_ On: September 07, 2002 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok...well, Mande, here it goes.
I know how you love this kind of stuff, and even though it seems boring to me, I absolutely LOVED it. The way you wrote drew me into the story. But I have to make one suggestion. When you are going from one part of a story to another, why not make that part even longer to draw the reader in even more? That way, they want to read more to find out what happens in that one part so they keep on reading until they get there. But even after that, I will say, that was one of your best. ;o) |
