"You sure YOUR! a gaurdian" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Silver Slayer777 On: January 28, 2005 12:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It rocks. now FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: adrianchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 03:01 CDT Comment/Review: i can see a great story coming just dont go with the usual cliches that people put into b/v fics. and i totally get the writer's block thing but your chapters are annoyingly short. |
Reviewed By: A new dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 16:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: llllllllllllloooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeee iiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Dragonrain On: November 06, 2002 19:25 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this fic is great so far!! keep it coming. i also love the way that at the end Goku always helps along. you've got his personality perfect! |
Reviewed By: pyro_gal4U [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 17:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: peaz update i luv this fic sooooooooo muc!!!!
pretty please with sugar on top and cream in da middle???!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 08:27 CDT Comment/Review: THIS FIC IS SO AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 18:31 CDT Comment/Review: I like this...A LOT! Update soon please :) |