| "How they got together" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: SaiyanHajime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Though you really need to start a new line when a new person speaks. Otherwise it gets confusing. Sorry if that sounded mean. I've done it before... i took the fic down after being told & changed everything. o.O |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was awesomenes! XD |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it too more! |
Reviewed By: RedYinRae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
i agree with aeris is dead
keep up the good work chichoie
from ur friend angel n_n |
Reviewed By: Aeris is dead [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
so short!!! that was good but write more! |
