"A Date With Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Meghanna_Starsong [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 20:31 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this poem you wrote. i have to say it's my favorite, but you already know that. hehe...it's so romantic and tragic, very morbid and colorful at once. how do you do that? *shakes head* stunning poetry as ever, hun. keep writing. like i'm FOREVER telling you...you've got a gift. DON'T GIVE IT UP DARN IT. :P | Reviewed By: Lyle Fitzgerald [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 21:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: EXQUISITE writing, Aidan (and being an English major, I'm rather particular, so that's quite a compliment -_-.)) Your alliteration is very unique, your forte I would venture. Very lyrical prose. The fluency is a bit timid at places, but you're young and you'll grow into that. I eagerly await future work. ::bows:: |
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