Title: Oh, come on Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 11:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Write more soon, please? You seem to have a talent in leaving us hungering for more. I will monitor this story for the next chapter, so I know when to drop another review. The beginning was a little too short to say much about, your ratings might rise if you wrote some more. I'm not ready to say anything about the originality, befor I find out the owner of the "mystic voice". Well, bye bye, until your next chapter, or my, if you still read my 'fics.
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