| "Shared Wishes, Shared Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mr. Allen On: March 15, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good plot, very original. |
Reviewed By: Rob On: March 12, 2003 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very good storie in which I lost myself for some time.
It has a very good plot and nice subplots.
The characters are very well put together, and there is a reason given for when they are ooc.
I hope the author posts new chapters soon |
Reviewed By: Sheen On: January 25, 2003 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
very very cool. please update soon. wanna see more. |
Reviewed By: Backstein On: January 03, 2003 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
not much to say here, I like it please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
It is no fair you posting this fanfic series and then saying that it has been put on hold |
Reviewed By: Frederick Herriot On: November 23, 2002 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice, sir. I hope to see much more of this in the future. Cheers!
Fred |
Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very quick start, what with Ranko being hounded by the NWC out on blood vendetta (Just out of curiosity what set them off this time? The failed marriage?)
The sharing of memories was very original, haven't seen that used before.
I noticed one thing, Kuno finally knows who Ranko is. I was kind of suprised that Ukyo was out for blood. Makes me wonder if Mara might have a hand in how things came about.
All and all this is a very interesting storyline, one that look forward to following. I eagerly await your next installment. |
Reviewed By: Sterling_Ag On: November 05, 2002 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for this story.It's a very interesting Idea and I really did enjoy it. I look forward to reading further installments....thanks again |
Reviewed By: Tannim On: October 16, 2002 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the idea of the goddesses taking in an injured Ranma. That the goddesses have mature and keiichi is dead is quite an interesting twist. The whole Skuld versus Akane thing needs to be redone, however. I can't imagine Akane being able to be civil to Skuld after that mini battle. Otherwise this is great!!! I cant what to see what the scan has found out about Ranma. |
Reviewed By: cyde On: October 16, 2002 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic. The idea that Ranma would find allies in not just Bell-chan, but in both of her sisters as well is just the type of divine justice (No pun intended ^_^) I've been waiting to see with poor Ranma. I'm glad to see someone writing an Aa! Megami-Sama/Ranma crossover (Well, one that isn't 4 years old and dead). Please follow through with it - I'll be checking back periodically to read updates. :) |
Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: October 15, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A couple of things that I really like are that (as one reviewer already mentioned) that this is not a "Ranma is a god" approach. Also, in this story, Ranma is being rescued instead of doing the rescuing. Nice twist. |
Reviewed By: richexs On: October 13, 2002 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice start. I like the cliffhanger for the ending of chapter three. The cast is very OOC from the way most portray them but it works well with the way the story is going. Hope to read more of this story. |
Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: October 20, 2002 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised and impressed.. a crossover of these two stories that doesn't start out with someone somewhere wishing they were a god/dess or replacing Keichi entirely as if he never existed.
For the most part I understood and liked the way the plot flowed, my problems coming from three things..
1) Why exactly _were_ all of the Neriman crazies after Ranma?2) Why was Ranma's initial response to call himself Ranko.. is it gonna turn out that a goddess from long ago of that name was killed off..? cause if so it's an old cliche so you'll have to do a very good job of writing it to stand out from the crowd..3) Skuld was warned ominously about the bug infestation at Furinkan.. yet the scene where she appears there has no mention of the annoying devil's spawn.. again why?
Those questions aside, this was a very entertaining story and I will look forward to reading more of it in the future. |
Reviewed By: John Surber On: September 11, 2002 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An interesting fic. Usually in and R1/2-OMG x-over Ranma is a long lost god, or deserving of a wish, or something like that.
Here he literally just happened to be in the right place at the right time for when the NWC got way out of control and would have
killed him with hteir overzealousness. I loved it when Bell lost her temper. When she does that in the manga (though it's not usuually
something you can see on her face and attitude) interesting things always happen. I look forward to seeing what happens to the 4 of
them as Ranma recovers at the temple, Skuld goes to Furinkan High, Kami-Sama's plan is revealed, and all of them are able to pick up
their lives in the wake of Keiichi's death, Ranma's disaster of a life, and whatever demons (mentally and emotionally) might be
plaguing Urd and Skuld. |
Reviewed By: vmeb On: March 16, 2003 08:53 CST
Comment/Review:
very impressive, hope you will continue cause i'm looking forward to it. |
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