| "Dear Forum" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 09:34 CST
Comment/Review:
absolutly bloody hillarius!!!! ive never found a one shot lemmon as funny as that before! i love his little thoughts interrupting every so often. the style definatly fits the theme. very porn mag-ish!!!! very good!
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Title: Dear Forum
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: April 13, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!! This story was just too funny ^_^ and I'm sorry it took so long for me to finally read it. I loved Veggie's perspective and also what was really going on in that head of his. Great job FM!!
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a letter!! I loved the added thoughts. They added just the right amount of humor.
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Title: HOLY HELL!
Reviewed By: TG On: January 15, 2004 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was AMAZING! have to say i loved the little thoughts... really added to Vegeta's character and were sooooo funny! Not to mention that being HOT AS HELL! i swear it could have melted all the snow here... and now that i know what an amazing writer you are... off to read your other fics! -TG
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: April 04, 2003 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was in class when I read this little gem and burst out laughing on the spot. As original as "A Cop Story", you captured Vegeta's character to perfection. I really hope that you'll write more humor fics based on his unique character. You have a definite talent for it!!! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 10:59 CST
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Wow, you nailed Vegeta and Vegeta nailed Bulma. Thanks for a great read and a big chuckle. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sublime... I can picture him so clearly throughout the whole fic! You truly are one of the very best writers on MM. I absolutely adore the little characterisation bits you put in... a joy to read! |
Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 08:33 CST
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that was funny!! lol
hope you had as fun writing that as I had reading it.. heh ^^
so different from the usual stuff you can find on the net |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahooooo! That was so damn gooood! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: November 20, 2002 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol =) |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 23:46 CST
Comment/Review:
lol! that was sexy and hilarious. I absolutely loved his ::ego inflated delusions:: thoughts! I loved your cop story, too. Please continue to write- it's such a pleasant change from some of the fiction on the net. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 06:20 CDT
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OMG This has to be one of the funniest and most original fics I have read in a long time! Thank you it was truely refreshing. |
Reviewed By: Goat On: September 13, 2002 19:32 CDT
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Why are they getting rid of the NC-17 stuff? Does antone know? |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was indredibly funny! *Still hasn't stopped giggling!* I loved his thoughs as he wrote the letter, too hysterical! (And I can actually seeing him write that too!) |
Reviewed By: W-chan On: September 12, 2002 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aha! I found you. Fabulous story Dah-ling! I love the original take on Vegeta's already massive ego...Just the way I like him. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more from you soon. ^_^ |
