| "The Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 15:11 CDT
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I like the story, but the chapters go 2,3,1. Please continue and post more of your stories
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 20:36 CDT
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I loved it!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 15:34 CDT
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Ummm... Was it just me or was that story backwards... The last chapter was the first... Wow... Was I ever confused there! You are though by far one of the best writers I have ever seen. I mean that story, it'descriptions, the grammar... GOD YOU ARE A BREATH OF FRESH AIR! I mean the second chapter(according to me the one where Kurama was all depressed over the letter and never spoke... Sorry I can't remeber it's name...) Was a little wierd for me... I mean you made Kurama all weepy and needy... NOt something I ever expected to see from the fox... And as for Hiei... Yeah, he was so loving and caring... I mean it isn't really a bad thing, but I just couldn;t really see it... Don't get me wrong though, I am not trying to put down your story... Wow... I know it looks like I am, but I did like it...I'm just saying it was a little too OOC... Maybe a warning next time would be god so I am not taken by suprise... However, if you are still writing fanfictions, pleas, PLEASE DO NOT STOP! Like I said before, you are a great writer and a breath of fresh air. Grace this fandom as much as you are able!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All three stories were just great!! I loved them all!!
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Reviewed By: KuramaVicious On: August 31, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. The only problem I ahve is that the apges are out of order. Otherwise, It was phenomenal. |
Reviewed By: MashiroInu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Im a ranter, if you wish to stay sane pass my review.
I almost cried midway through the fic. and belive me, it takes alot for me to tip. I held it back though, and the fluff at the end was so poofy I almosed suffocated in it. Its weird... I read any yaoi with charecters I approve, but when the fic says yuri I steer clear. I supose that m/m relationships get more emotions and generaly have better results in the end. Exept one fic I read... man, I cried for that one. the main charecters friend was raped and shot in the head before he was tortured and raped himself. Then he got shot twice right above his heart and the crminal was never brought to justice because he shot himself. Three Bishys from one of my fav. animes all dieing in the same fic. Its from the anime rurouni kenshin and the characters thet were involved were kenshin, sanosuke, and saitoh. Well, enough about that. Lets talk about your fic. I totaly understand why Hiei needed some 'alone' time, but it broke my heart when Kurama was all depresed. I would rant for several more hours but the worst problem that comes with ranting has made itself known. IVE RUN OUT OF THINGS TO RANT ABOUT!!! So, as much as I want to hold your undivided attention, ive gotta split.
~sarabada
Andrea |
Reviewed By: Bolivianprob [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please PLEEESSSEEEE write more! I know its angsty but.... You can't leave me hanging! AT LEAST LET kurama beg hiei to take him back. Shimatta i sound like the futile kitsune myself. Quess thats cause I dont have a love. ~ sigh
SUGOI!!! |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 16:55 CDT
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Very nice. A good trio. Enjoyed them tremendously. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 00:02 CDT
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I agree 100% with everything Tori said!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tori On: June 22, 2003 20:01 CDT
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*sniff
That was so sweet and sad! I love it! heh heh! I like the way you did Hiei's character, cold on the outside but pretty warm on the inside. I hope you write more like this!
-Tori |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruses...why do the ratings only go up to 10?
DAMN YOUS MEDIAMINER! DAMN YOUS I SAY!
*ahem*
Anywho, I must say I thouroughly enjoyed this fic ^_^ You're writing style is very smooth and articulate, but still an easy read... go u
I'm not really one for romance (being the bitter, hateful creature that I am) but I'd be lying if I said that I didn't get those pesky butterflies in my tummy while reading... stupid butterflies I tell you!
The lemons were EXCELLENT btw... Graphic but not nasty... tastefully unrefined ^_^ There is a lacking in those style of sex scenes now adays...
er... heh... I'm going to stop complaining now, AND finish this review since I seem to be writing you a freakin' novel here *whistles innocently*
Anyway, great work!
Toodles till another day |
Reviewed By: Adaon On: November 09, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic to read! I really enjoyed it! Do you plan on writing any more? |
Reviewed By: TARA On: October 28, 2002 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it alot. It was real sweet hope you have more stories in the future |
Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was real sweet. I loved the other chapters, and how you wrote this. Do you plan on writing anymore of it? Or no? |
