| "Space Station Z" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 09:14 EST
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Excellent, excellent chapter - I was totally captivated by Dr Briefs and the custard... :D Please don't apologise for the time it took - writing of this calibre is always worth waiting for... :D Damn... I've never wished that I was Puar before... :|
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan-jess (bleh stupid mm) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 04:48 EST
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ahhh.... what happen to bv... well I guess we'll find out... that was evil... a very good chappie... but that was evil... I loved it though and can't wait for the next chappie
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Title: update?
Reviewed By: Reji On: September 25, 2003 10:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please dont tell me that you hve abandonned this fic, McRoury! We are all waiting for more... Hurry that update! And please add me to your mailing list if you have one, L_Reijnen@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!! Something worth braving MMs slowness for!! Excellent job so far - you have a great, esily readable style - wonderful flow. Like 'Cop Story' and the wonderful 'Letter to Forum' It's a joy to read.
I've got to say though, I'm disgusted that someone of your calibre has so few reviews... :( |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 22:39 EDT
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I can't believe it's been forever since I've read A Cop Story, RM, and still one of my friends had to tell me that you were posting this fic on MM. I guess that's what I get for not checking the *cough* lower-rated fics, ne? :}
I forgot how much I enjoy your slick sense of writing humor (like Nappa's gas) and the depth you put into the characters (like Vegeta's struggles to be 'diplomatic'.) So far, you haven't disappointed.
I'm anxious to see where this journey will take us... |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: April 11, 2003 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't come to MediaMiner very often but Ember sent me a link to this story soooo... How could I possibly resist? You are one of my favorite authors, so finding this gem after the sucessful "A Cop's Story" was a wonderful treat. Keep up the fantastic writing, buddy!!! |
Reviewed By: W-chan On: March 17, 2003 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Bub! Missed ya lots. Keep the chapters comin'!!! |
Reviewed By: kainee On: February 10, 2003 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please review! I enjoy your stories a lot. It's obvious you put a lot of effort into it. This story has a lot of potential! |
Reviewed By: kainee (kainee1984@yahoo.com) On: February 10, 2003 23:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is coming out to be a really really great fic!! Please continue! I like how you take the concept of space and space travel and interpose the DBZ characters into it. More Vegeta and Bulma! Goku (oops should I say Kakarott?) and Chichi are soo cute! Please write more!
I loved your first fic and I would love your next fic if you would just finish it!!! OKies, I'll stop my ravings now ^__^ |
Reviewed By: W-chan (Too lazy to sign in) On: January 07, 2003 12:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thought you had disappeared on me. Oooh, I wanna see what happens when Kakarott catches up to Chi-Chi. I love how you portray Goku as an innocent with a tiny bit of a dirty mind. I see that you gave Marron a bit of an attitude too. Stellar! I can't wait to find out what happens next. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 07:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey Rob! Nice to see you updated. Great chapter. I really love it. It was just too funny to see Vegeta and Kakarot having a conversation like that. I couldn't stop laughing. Only problem is that the chapter wasn't long enough. ^_~ But it's no biggy. Can't wait to see what you have next. Later! |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 22, 2002 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good! Please keep going |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny, active and flowing smoothly so far. I love how you portrayed yamucha-it fits him so well. Excellent job on the b/v meeting. Very original. And i love the romance element. Please include it:] |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice |
Reviewed By: W-chan (signing in sux) On: October 30, 2002 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! The ChiChi and Kakarott scene was adorable. Tens across the board!! Bulma running into Vegeta was pretty funny too. Niz job! Keep the updates coming or I'll have to break out my official industrial sized, ChiChi endorsed frying pan! ^_~
~ Wanda |
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