| "Secrets Revealed" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:25 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:25 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 01:25 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic! you should make it so that Trunks is born( That would be a great fic!) and then Bra. |
Reviewed By: Gelton On: October 21, 2002 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic. A little more detail on the sex scene but so far good. |
Reviewed By: Lone Lady On: October 16, 2002 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Fantastic story! I can't wait to read more of your fics! |
Reviewed By: SailorSenshi68 On: October 16, 2002 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how you brought them together. It's exactly how Vegeta would act and Bulma. Great fic! |
Reviewed By: Konishiwa On: October 16, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story! My favorite couple of all times!! Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Certainly one of the more in-character and realistic B/V stories I've read. Sex scenes could use extension tho - don't be shy, delve right in and go for the descriptive details! :D |
