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| "The Words We Ache to Say -- Volume X" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading all of these (or I'm going to at least. It's not my fault I'm a slow reader, dammit!) so I might as well leave a review for each one I read.
First of all ... I LOVE the title!!! So sexy1! And then there's the poem. I mean ... WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I was blown away!!! This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ARE A GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Continue soon, please!! This work is amazing and wonderful and I need to read more soon!!!! *is happy because there are still many more poems to go* | Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Looks around and hides an apple* I will never eat fruit again. *Walks away mumbling to self* heh heh, j/k, wonderful work Janelle! NO BEING HARD ON YOURSELF! *Reprimands you* | Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 00:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
:) Yes it's me again. I was ready to just read "Crash" and not review again because I already had once, but that 'chapter' could not go, um, 'unreviewed'. Truthfully, that is the best poem you've written yet. You figured out which words to put and in which places to put them, and it all just flowed together so well. I applaud you.
And thank you cool person for mentioning me in your poems... now I feel special *giggles and blushes, then runs and hides behind a tree*. What? I like smut! But only good smut, like yours! Even though good and smut should never be in the same sentence, but you know what I mean. :)
Please, post your X-rated poems for your biggest on-line fan of them, ME! Thank you again Duo No Tsuin, for you are one hell of a talented writer. | Reviewed By: Masquerade On: September 25, 2002 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised you haven't gotten a lot of reviews (you may have gotten a lot of e-mails though; what do I know?!?). You are one of the most talented... how do I put this?... 'sensual' poem writers on the 'net, and I'm not joking because I've read a lot of these types of poems and yours caught my interest the best. Your style of writing is, as I already put, 10 out of 10, and you know which words to use to keep the reader going. I will await your next 'Chapter', and make sure to read it as well. Again, you are very talented and interesting, and I just wanted to let you know that because nobody else had left a review saying what needed to be told! |
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