| "Wish Of The Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Goku
Reviewed By: Goku Rules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUCKS NO SEX
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Reviewed By: BrollisChik [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're ratings are seemingly good. Need to work on your writing some more and the action was pretty good. The romance was great. But you also need to work on your spelling. All in all this story is good. Update soon. |
