| "Trading Places" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: cathowl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another chapter! Just great! ...Even if I don't completely understand what happened...
...But that's ok! =^_^= it's good anyways! |
Reviewed By: Epona On: December 15, 2002 12:03 CST
Comment/Review:
awww...i didn't do anything. oh well! ^_^ good job! i thought it WAS odd but... heh... |
Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O THATS RIGHT! MMMMMMYYYYY Mirai! Shower scene! Whoo baby! ::Singing:: I like it like that! Hehehe, aaaawwwww BG and Veggie dude getting comfy. Don't have much time for a vveeerrrrryyyyy long review...nor the creativity. 9.6 Mental note: While being hyper is good, NEVER mix pepsi with nerds...unless yousa want to be so annying peoples can hardly stand yousa! ^^ Love the story J'Dee, happy b-day!...When it comes anyways.
YLG,
DS |
Reviewed By: Deathdroid On: November 15, 2002 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolio, I never realised I was in the fic!! Now to cause mayhem as a cell Jr. :D
Keep up the great work!! |
Reviewed By: Aiya On: November 02, 2002 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
loved chibi chapter! he he he... chibis....
NEwayz..... is 17 gonna show up? i hope so... me want 17!!!!!!!!! *drool*
update soon! this is an awesome story! (even if i dont get 17.... *sigh*) |
Reviewed By: cathowl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Cathowl in chappy 12... Aw... hrn... Chibitizing everyone?! Did it get me?! Oh I hope I ducked behind the bar or something! And what happened to Turles? hn... Hey Turles! C'mere and lookit all my purty shounen-ai with you in it! Hmn? Here's a piccy with you and Kaky that I drew! And read this fic of you and ouji-sama! Oo! Kakarotto! Lookit this picture of you and you kissing! Heh-heh-heh... I'm crazy... Chibi's everywhere! *does the crazy 'I'm on a weird sugar high' dance, then collapses on the floor* Whee... |
Reviewed By: Phoenix Starr On: October 29, 2002 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Dudette I LOVED this new chappie!! So kool!!! Specially the part where S'rac and Vegeta were playing Street Fighter!! That was AWESOMENESS!!!!
Mmm Klondike Bars, yummy icy creamyness!!! Sorry!! Food Induced Daydream, happens to me when I haven't eaten all day simply coz I forgot to. Weird huh!? Hmmm, I think that Klondike Bars should be available in ALL countries, ESPECIALLY England, coz that's where I'm from, and I NEED KLONDIKE BARS AND EGGO WAFFLES!!!! WHICH AREN'T AVAILABLE HERE!!!!!! I GO CRAZY!!!!!! What would you do for a Klondike Bar??? Break your computer? Eat a yarn ball? Fax yourself to America dressed as Bin Laden? THAT IS HOW NEEDABLE KLONDIKE BARS ARE!!!!!!!!!!! I AM NOT KIDDING!!!!!!!
Sorry J'dee, I gotta stop rambling!!! So, hurry with the next chappie, and remember, beware of Anti-DBZ people, and next time you see one, kill one. I did (not literally, verbally) and he is now a DBZ otaku, ALL THANKS TO ME!!!!! Also, listen to BAD RELIGION!!! THEY ARE AWESOME!!!!!!
Great chappie, and beware of Koala Bears.
from
The Original #1 *p horns*Goku/Kaky-chan Otaku,
Phoenix Starr |
Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: October 29, 2002 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
“Of course because like that make-up add, he’s ‘worth it’…”
LMAO! Dude, that was the funniest line I've ever read! 'Buy Skittles in a new, shiny glass bottle for only £2450.99 in Evil Warrior. Why? Because you're worth it.'
Quorky: I now have to get Mirai Trunks for two girls? *sigh*
I don't see what they see in him! Mirai is obviously a boy, Skittles is a man!
Quorky: Thank you for sharing that with us.
Dude! I just had a thought! Now I'm 5, will I not have my perverted sense of humour and siggestive comments?
Quorky: Oh yes God, please!
What was that?
Quorky: I said, 'Oh the horror! Not your disgusting sense of humour!'
That's what I thought.
Quorky: So you want J'dee to write about a 5 year old that wants to get Skittles into bed?
Hey, Skittles is suitable for children of 12 months and up
Quorky: O.o |
Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ EEEEEEE! MIRAI IS RIGHTFULLY MINE NO MATTER WHAT EPONA SAYS! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ^^ Victory! That was funny, 'We'll call it a draw Kakarot' lol! And the chibi disco ball! It would be fun to be a chibi...but mesa want Mirai! Yes Quorky! Help mesa! ::Dr Evil pinky thing:: MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Great as always! Hmmmm... |
Reviewed By: Epona On: October 28, 2002 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
noooooooooo bad quorky!!! my mirai!!!! quorky promised!!! and i brought him back to bananagirl too!!! so she ought to help me.... *cries her head off* MY MIRAI DEATHSTORM BETTER LAY OFF COS HE'S MINE!!!!! BG!!!!!! I BROUGHT BACK QUORKY DON'T FORGET!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! *sniffles* how come i can't get him... DARN!!! KILL MIRAI FAN! *sics Bob the giant squid on Deathstorm* Mwahaha!!!! GOOOOOO BOB!!!
=^.^= Cat |
Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul On: October 28, 2002 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap! *grins evilly* I'm so mean to poor, poor Gohan... hehehehe... just wait till we get back to his house... *chuckles quietly to herself in a deranged and physcho manner*
I can't wait for the next chap! Hurry please! |
Reviewed By: bee On: October 28, 2002 05:38 CST
Comment/Review:
AIII! *bounces round in a hyper fashion* new chapter new chapter i gots shin-chan to myself! ^.^ *glomps shin* mine mine mine mine.... ^.^ great chapter update soon and drink LOTS of fanta sugar induced crazyness is GOOD |
Reviewed By: bee On: October 23, 2002 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you are amazing! i'm trying to do one of these on ff.net and its hell! i think its great you have this many people in it and you can remember all their stats, GO YOU! |
Reviewed By: cathowl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Turles! Hey Turles! Come lookit this yaoi picture of you, Veegie-sama and Kaky all together in bed! Wanna see? Oh, and here's just you and Vegeta-sama, and you and Kaky... You don't know who Kaky is? It's short for Kakarotto! Didn't you hear the other Kaky fans saying it? Goku's Saiyajin name is SO cool! Kakarotto! Kakarotto! Kakarotto! Hey Vegeta-sama! Want a carrot? *carves 'Kakarotto' onto a carrot and attemts to feed it to the prince*
You know, with all the body-switching going on, wouldn't it be funny if someone got into a character that's the wrong gender? I think it'd be funny if a Kakaro- oops, a GOKU fangirl got stuck in 'Gita-sama's body. Hehehe.
Hey! Yamcha! Wanna see all the pictures I drew of you as a Saiyajin? Most of them are yaoi too! *Makes a face at Piccolo as s/he runs past* Bleh, nameks. Oh YAM-kuuuuun! C'mere and lookit my piccies! And Kaky! I order you to take off your shirt and dance for us! Dance! Dance! *hugs herself and spins in a circle until she gets dizzy and crashes into Turles* Whee! Look! I have more yaoi for you to see! *Starts jabbering endlessly about her Saiyajin yaoi pictures and stories* |
Reviewed By: Washu Kobayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought I'd fill out the form, so you can write me better. ^^
Name: Washu *duh!*
Age: 15
Hair: Dark brown, cut short (like Videl's)
Eyes: Green
Clothes: Baggy orange pants and a DBZ T-shirt with Chibi Goku on the front
(as in clothes from our world not theirs)
Fav character: Goku
Regular / Guest: Um, what does this mean? ^^
Anything else: I have a dog named Nimbus ^^. And my muses are Pikurin (a fusion of Piccolo, Krillin, Oolong, & Puar) Para ( a fusion of Pan & Bra) Gotenks, SSJ4 Gogeta, Neko-Videl, and Tristian (from the story "Black Flowers") I hate/fear the telephone. And, last, I love the idea of Goku on a leash, acting all puppy-like.
Ja ne!
Washu & Her muse gang
Pikurin
Para
Gotenks
SSJ4 Gogeta
Neko-Videl
Tristian |
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