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| "Trading Places" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] | Reviewed By: Washu Kobayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 16:26 CDT
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Yay!! I am finally in the fic!! And being ChiChi gives me 100% access to Goku-cha! ^^ Now Pepper (My nickname for Goku-cha) will be all mine!
Pikurin: As your muse, I strongly feel you should channel your energy into more efficent things other than Goku chasing
Piku-chan, your Piccolo side is showing
Tristian: Are you gonna use the leash, Washu? Hmmm?
If J'dee writes it, I guess. But if Goku Goku or is Srac Goku? I need to reread the chapter, I just skimmed through to find myself. ^^
NekoVidel: Nya? Where's Gohan?
Hey yeah! *picks up NekoVidel* Do ya think maybe at least one of my muses could be in the fic too? NekoVidel would climb up on Gohan's shoulder and never get off ^^
Tristian: And I could chase after all the babes, and add to my underwear collection.
Pikurin: Fool
And *grabs Pikurin's cape* Piku-chan could guard the door while I seduce Goku ^^
Pikurin: What?!
*hee-hee* What say ya, J'dee? ^^
~Washu & her muse trio
Pikurin
Tristian "Trissy-chan" Briefs
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NekoVidel | Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 20:04 CDT
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Forgot one little itty bitty teeny weeny thing:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIL COKE! SOURCE MUST BE DESTROYED AT ONCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YLG,
DS | Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul On: October 03, 2002 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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'nother good chap!!! Oo joy!! I'm being evil!!! *grins at Gohan who cowers in fear* Muwhahahaha!!! Videl'll kill me for corrupting her husband if we ever meet!!!
Spiffy!! A chibifying light!!! *crosses her fingers and hopes it hits Veggie* A chibi Vegeta!! *eyes go all dreamy, anime style* | Reviewed By: Aiya On: August 25, 2003 10:19 CDT
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wow. ok.
anywayz,
i have to leave my 17!?!?!?! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but i love my 17!
cant i take my 17 home with me?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! | Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOkey days, my review isn't showing up for mesa so mesa gonna leave another one. If my other one pops up then ignore this one okey days? ^^ Okey days!
Actual Review:
MIRAI IS MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE TIMES INFINITY! :P Epona can't have him! -_- Meanie S'rac, taking the last slice of pizza! That was completely uncalled for!...Mmmm, but mesa found my mirai! MESA COMING KOI! ::Chases after the cute, handsome, bishoneny, buff, strong, smart, hot BISHONEN!!!!:: Mwhahahahahahaha! Get more out soon! This is awesome!
YLG,
DS | Reviewed By: Phoenix Starr On: October 02, 2002 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dudette!!! You inserted me!!! YAY!!!! I dun wanna beat up Washu, but I SO WANNA BEAT UP THAT DEATH BITCH STUDY FREAK!!!! Oh yeah, and I want GOKU-CHAN!!! I call him GOKU-CHAN!!! and my name starts with a CAPITAL LETTER on the P and the S!!!
Sorry, ickle things like dat kinda piss me off, but I DO like the name Kaky, it's V Kawaii. So can you make me call him Kaky-chan? *puppy eyes* PWEEEEEZ!!!!! Oh yeah, and whenever I say Goku/Kaky-chan's name, presentation horns will sound out of nowhere after and before his name.
Eg:
YAY!!! GOOOOO *presentation horns* GOKU/KAKY-CHAN!!! *presentation horns*
You can choose whether I call him *presentation horns* Goku-chan *p horns* or *p horns* Kaky-chan *p horns*.
I WANNA BRAINWASH *p horns* GOKU/KAKY-CHAN *p horns* TO MAKE HIM BELIEVE THAT HE LOVES ME AND NOT EVIL STUDY FREAK BITCH!!!!!!!! Can we all have author powers like in ANBM??? PWEEEEEZ!!! Then we don't have the bother of finding the dragonballs to make wishes!!!! See, its MUCH more convenient!!! OH YEAH!!! And can I have a li'l plushie muse called Cachooka? He's about two foot tall, plump, fluffy, an Alsation with a blue and orange collar with spikes on it, and a bubble pipe. He is very cheeky and makes mean comments to me about my taste in music (Bad Religion) and my undying obsession for *p horns* GOKU/KAKY-CHAN!!! *p horns*.
Cachooka: Well, I really can't see what is so great about him, its stupid that way you stare at the TV screen in awe and admiration when he is on the screen, plus the fact that you are ALWAYS humming or singing one of those STUPID "songs"
Shut up Chooka.
Cachooka: I will NOT shut up!!! This is the first time that I have EVER been on the net, and I will take this chance to tell everyone what a BAKA you are!!!
Hey!! See what I mean J'dee? *puts duck tape around Chooka's muzzle* He's a real meanie! I'm just letting him on the net because he was begging me to, so I $Reluctantly$ agreed.
Cachooka: No you didn't, I had to threaten to rip down and tear up all of your Obsession Merchandise.
How did you get the duck tape off? Never mind. J'dee, can he be in the fic as my muse?
Thankies!! ^^
from
The Original #1 FanGirl of *p horns* Goku/Kaky-chan *p horns*
Phoenix Starr | Reviewed By: Aiya On: October 02, 2002 14:51 CDT
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really good! he he he.... i wanna get my hands on 17, he hasnt appeared in this fic yet!!!! 17.... *drool* okay, he he.. NEwayz, update soon! cause u know i love this fic! | Reviewed By: Karienta On: September 30, 2002 20:01 CDT
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Good show ol' chap! ^.^ Awww, S'rac is like Goku! So cute! *thwaps head and mutters Veggie fan* Well must be going now. I'm quite dead and OSI won't come to help me. Cya next chappie! | Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE! ^^ Of course mesa would go after MY Mirai!...Damage? What damage? My pizza that theif! Hiisssss! Mirai? In white flares?!.........-_0 ::Gets out soap:: S'rac better watch it...cuz that pizza was mine! But that disco ball is cool! Whosa would have thought a big glittery thingy could chibize someone? ^^ Your such a great writer J'Dee! Mesa can't wait until yousa get more out! GTG!
YLG,
DS | Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: September 30, 2002 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE FUCK? TIEN IS NO WAY BETTER THAN VEGETA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Quorky: Remember, Stacey, inhale, exhale, inhal, exhale.
OMG! TIEN? The retard, although with three eyes, is still not cool? I have lost all faith in mankind!
Quorky: ....
And Gohan SUCKS! His prescence just annoys me! The fact he even exits annoys me! I want to put rotten bananas in his undies! I want to cut and dye his hair-punk stylee!
Quorky: You also want to measure Vegeta's genitals!
Who says I haven't? *smirks*
Quorky: O.O And you didn't tell me?!
Well, I didn't think you'd be interested!
Quorky: Of course I am! With a little exaggeration, you practically jumped his bones, so Bulma will divorce him which will clear the way for me!
Dude...you're a monkey!
Quorky: SO?! She mated with a half-monkey, maybe no she'll want the whole package!
Do NOT call Skittles a monkey! His a monkey PRINCE, so :p
Quorky: He doesn't deserve his monkey lineage.
UGH! I CANNOT STAND KAKKAROT OR HIS FIRST-BORN!
Quorky: What about Goten?
Hmmm...I can tolerate him> But he'd have to change his name...
Quorky: To what exactly?
Something like...Jammie, or Elijeta! DUDE! That name is SERIOUSLY cool!
Quorky: Jammie?
NO! Elijeta! OMG! My sons are gonna be called Elijeta and K.O
Quorky: Doesn't K.O stand for knock out in combat games?
Yeah, but it's just so cool! K.O! K.O! K.O! K.O! K.O! K.O, K.O, K.O, K.O!!!!!!!! ELijeta and K.O, what a nice ring!
Quorky: Uh...great!
And then little Quorky Jr, the smartest and most cutest of them all!
Quorky: *eyes go all teary* You're going to name a son after me?
No, dude, that's the goldfish! | Reviewed By: Chavi aka Epona On: September 30, 2002 14:53 CDT
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LOL!!!!!! funny!!! hehe, demon frying pan study freak bitch from hell... funny! i wanna be alone w/ mirai!!! waaaa!!! *sniffle* oh and i'm gonna kill all other fans of mirai so i can have him all to myself... *pulls out baseball bat w/ one hand and readies energy blast w/ the other* HAHAHAHAHA!!! KILL THEM ALL!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *shoots mirai fans and hits them w/ bat* hehe, i wish...T_T i don't know where they are!!! i command all mirai fans to tell me where they are and give me lots of money so i can go destroy them!!! *uses evil subliminal mind messages* | Reviewed By: Mabelle On: September 30, 2002 09:32 CDT
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I love it J'dee, however I REALLY think Piccolo wants to dance more...if you catch my drift JK. I love it...the pizza and S'rac, it's truely amazing how you've captured him. After talking with that guy I always feel like I should make sure I'm in the real world and not online with GOKU!! I don't care what he says he's even MORE Gokuish than ME!!!
C U All around!!! | Reviewed By: PhoenixStarr On: September 28, 2002 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI J'dee!!! My name is PhoenixStarr, but I can go by either Phoenix, Starr, or Nix. I REALLY WANNA BE IN THIS FICCY!!!
I have brown hair, brown eyes, and my Saiying is Food is Life, the Rest is Just Details, aka, FILTRIJD, aka Filtridged, which is my word.
I LOVE GOKU-CHAN, he is SOOO KAWAIIIIII!!!!!! *drools* Mmmmmmmm.....Goku-chan...*glazed eyes*
I wanna be a regular in this fic. PLEEEEEZ!!! If not, I shall have to use the Wrath and Power of the Drawing Pad and Pencils. Yes, I too am an art student, but I am doing AS levels at the mo. I am English, and I am 16, and I CAN LEARN TO DRIVE SOON!!!! WATCH OUT PEOPLE, PHOENIX IS COMING THROUGH!!! YEAH!!!!!
So sorry, I am REALLY hyper on coca cola and cookies. Oh yeah, my fave food is, *presentation horns sound* COFFEE ICE-CREEEEEEEM!!!!!!*presentation horns again* So have lots of the *presentation horns* COFFEE ICE-CREAM!!!!!! *presentation horns*
At one time, I would like to wish for Goku-chan to be Goku-chan, and not S'rac, and have S'rac in a different Goku-chan body, and also wish for Goku-chan to be 17, but still have all his powers, and forget Demon Frying Pan Study Freak Bitch From Hell.
I also want a FIGHT TO THE FINISH with that Demon Frying Pan Study Freak Bitch From Hell, and WIN!!!!!!!
Oh yeah, one more thing...LEATHER PANTS FOR GOKU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
from Phoenix "Goku-chan fan" Starr | Reviewed By: Chavi West-Wind aka Epona On: September 26, 2002 21:53 CDT
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Oh when are u gonna update this? and i thought of something else. Right about now i'd probably take quorky to bananagirl to ensure my "moment alone w/ trunks" cos that's just what i'd do. and i'd probably yell at the other mirai fans for a while then maybe get in a fight w/ them. ne ways, still gonna let me know when u update? come on...please? | Reviewed By: Cathowl On: September 26, 2002 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippe! I'm in GT! Wait... GT... NO! They cropped my ouji-sama's hair! Not the GT hair! NOOOOOO!!!
...At least I have purdy pictures of him with long pretty hair. And him kissing Goku, and Radditz, and Radditz and Goku kissing and Barodkc and Vegeta, and pretty much any two Saiyajin you can think of I have pictures of them kissing. Except Nappa and Brolly. I don't like Brolly and Nappa's ugly.
*Looks over at Piccolo* Ew! The namek! Ew! ...Turles? Me like Turles! He looks like Kakarotto and he isn't married! Oo... Maybe I can give Kaky a big ol' hug and drag him over to Vegeta-sama and hug them both! Veggi-sama... Wanna read some of my yaoi stories? Do ya?
Oo! Trunks-kun! *Hugs Trunks and speeds back to hugging Kakarotto* So many Saiyajin and halfies, can't decide who to hug... Aw, I'll just stick with Kaky!
...Really like your story, you got me great. Lime... Ehg. The shiny eyes when I heard Veggie-sama was there were PERFECT! Love ya! More please? I would have reviewed sooner, and I did ion ff.net, but I was having trouble accessing mediaminor earlier. Eh.
(Purrs and huggles Kakarotto-chan* Goku... Kaky... Purdy Saiyajin... | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] |
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