| "Pure Sex" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this was awesome, I normally bash Rinny (for personal reasons alone) in my stories but I liked her in here. And to Mimi that complained of it.... she can read my ff yaoi... plenty of Squall and Seifer in that. |
Reviewed By: NeonGirl On: December 26, 2002 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think the title perfectly fits the story. But Good Job.
NeonGirl |
Reviewed By: The Professor On: December 20, 2002 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was an excellent piece of writing.
Now I am going to put in my two cents about people who only review fics to complain about them. First, if someone doesn't like lemons, they should not read them. And if they happen to hate lemons, then they should ceratinly not review them. Rants of "ewwwwww! you sicko!" and "you make me sick" make me, for one, wonder if the person actually read the fic. Also reviews are for constructive critisism, not flaming.
::steps off soapbox:: Thank you to anyone who read through all of this little rant of mine. |
Reviewed By: Mimi Glassforde On: December 16, 2002 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
you hentai freaks make me sick. Its all about the love, and the gentleness. No fun. a good hard fucking, leaving them screaming their lungs out. thats what you need. and whats with your titles? I mean, Pure Sex, Deep Sex, Hard Sex, Rough Sex, these are just the same damn word, with four different adjectives. it makes me want to hum the Daft Punk song, "harder, better, stronger, faster". and it seems like something you could put in a ressume. Like
"Things Im good at: Rough sex.
My plans for the future: Pure Sex
Things I love to do: Deep sex"
do you have some sort of obsession with the word sex? and the worst part, ITS RINOA! EW! lets stab Rinoa and ease squalls tention. watch him fool around with Seifer. YAY. thats a good fic plot. yours...yours sucks. sorry, but it does *Writes that down in the big book of facts* no more writing for you. because it sucks! |
Reviewed By: Shadowreborn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story, very tasteful and nicely spoken i fely i was in there minds at times. good work. |
Reviewed By: Subaru_Sumeragi On: July 20, 2002 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me say this up front. Hentai tends to blow the giant monkey (pun intended ^.^). This, although, while being almost entirly about sex, has feeling, emotion, and is beautifully written! I don't even consider it so much hentai as a work of art. Keep up the good work! I'd love to see how you write combat, what with all the muscle tensing and climaxing XD |
Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story a lot! Squall and Rinoa are my fav characters. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Dave Well Huang On: May 29, 2002 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, strange I havent seen the dedication here before... ;)
This is still a great story and truly deserves its rank here. And I am still looking forward to DS... |
Reviewed By: Teko Windstar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really cool as so I like FF games alot and I was waiting for a Story like this. Good Job.
^-^ |
Reviewed By: Hiasha On: May 21, 2002 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! Sweet and romantic...
Itīs not just sex, we can see Squall and Rinoaīs feelings... Great job. |
Reviewed By: Big Fan On: April 01, 2002 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive never read anything so good |
Reviewed By: animeman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fanfic and i was glad that somebody actually wrote this type of fic. keep up the excellent work.hope a new chapter is posted soon. |
Reviewed By: jomitsui [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2001 02:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic here! Got the character very well. Hey, when r u goin to continue with the fic? Had been going in and out the series for mths but u yet wrote a new chapter.
Sorrie for rushing u but u really wrote so well that I wish I can continue to read it as soon as possible.
Jo |
Reviewed By: Bubba On: September 08, 2001 02:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok here it is :) I like this even better than RS will look forward to DS ;) |
Reviewed By: Tuxedo Jack On: October 08, 2001 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww, sweet. Something I haven't seen in a while. |
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