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| "Midvalley's Serenade" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 14:12 CST
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Only you, Jexia, only you can make an adventure out of a boring train ride. Kudos!
'Now, he's a joke.' How much you wanna bet that the speaker has to be some jealous groupie. Where did those people come up with that? I suppose that's more of a society question, so never mind. One thing: Adonis, where do you come up with these cool descriptions.
And I agree with the general population. That 'musical scene' was awesome. Imagine being a 'baddie' with both legs broken, someone asks what happened, and explain with, 'hit with music'. To Hot Lips and Midvalley, I raise my can of coke in 'Cheers'.
Glad Nick is doing well. What's going to happen about those 300 iles? A stretch SUV? | Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you illustrated the part where Midvalley used his special abilities with his saxaphone. Very cool. This fanfic, along with a few others, has inspired me to write my own... I just have to develop a story... Anyway, I can't wait for more chapters! (and yet I'm not looking forward to this story to end XD)
-iMaxed | Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 22:04 CST
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Again, your dream sequences and portrayl of the music is stunning.
Another good chapter.
-k. | Reviewed By: Sasha On: February 14, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was really great. Midvalley and Wolfwood has always been my favorite paring, but I've never thought about them actually being in _love_ untill I read this fic. It was awesome, and I liked the way you ended it. Parts of it even made me cry. I really felt for them when I read this. *sniffle* great job.
There should be more Midvalley fiction out there. He was always my favorite character. Thank you for writing this. | Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, still brillant.
Your portrayl of Midvalley is stunning. I'd like to know where you come up with some of the ideas for the music side of the whole thing, which is probably my favorite part.
I'd have to say that my only let-down so far is that the sections between the time Nicholas leaves and the time he returns are so rushed. The rest is spellbinding and amazing.
I still don't like your Legato, much, either. But that's personal taste, and what you *do* do with your view of the character is rather good.
Wonderful work. One of the best stories I've ever read. Definately in my top 10.
I hope you do more work on it soon. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(comical crash, then scrambles over to read.)
Wow! Powerful chapter. Perfectly carried out.
It's amazing how in tune Midvalley is with Nick. It's amazing and touching how those two know each other so well.
Man! I love this update. I don't know which story was better: Midvalley's or Nick's. (I won't say so in a review for obvious reasons, but Hot Lips and Midvalley. . I knew it!) I have a lot more respect for Evergreen now than I had. | Reviewed By: Miraba On: January 27, 2003 18:08 CST
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*weak grins*
That last chapter was particularly moving. Midvalley (finally!) learning who his father is, Nick overhearing Chapel's speach.
Keep up the good work. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 21:30 CST
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Love this! Love this!
Man, picture this. Snow is falling outside, blues is playing on the radio, and reading a wonderful update from one of the best fics ever. Oh man, I love this! The fic, the evening, yeah. . . .
OK, enough of that. If I haven't said it enough, course not, this was terrific. The imagery was fantastic, especially the dreams. Its always your dreams that make me want to draw. And the emotional connection between Middie and Nick. Oh wow, when chastity is better than hot sex. And the tying it in with Mei City; yep, Middie, something of the 'Springer' sort is afoot--NOT. And McCoy is awesome. What a guy. Total respect for him now.
Man, it was great. | Reviewed By: Twilight Rose On: January 20, 2003 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I always do tens for you, feel happily privlidged, feel so privledged you write more. ^_^; Nick said Vash, and Midvalley heard him. That means a questioning session is inevitable, once Nicky stops dying. Which he had BETTER. I have a sickly feeling about Midvalley being reassigned though. A feeling that makes me so very sad. You'll have to update this amazing fic soon. VERY VERY soon. Or as soon as humanly possible. ^_^; | Reviewed By: Twilight Rose On: January 15, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you spell better then me, so points to you. I started reading this story awhile ago at ff.net, and then lost it for the longest time. You cannot imagine how thrilled I was to find it here, with many more chapters, and chapters still pending! You did a WONDERFUL job capturing the attitude of what is basically pretty much a background character in the Anime, and actually bringing him to life. The way you communicate his reasons, his passions and desires really helps me understand why you seemingly like this character so much, and I must admit, I was not really a Midvalley fan before this fanfic, but now I think I am. The writing is of the highest caliber, and the fact that different, fresh vocabulary is used is absolutely invigorating. ^_^ I have the sad, sinking feeling, since this is following the Anime storyline to a perfect key though, it will end the same, and that makes me cry. I hope that you continue to write this wonderful story, and I also hope that you update soon. ^_^; | Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible fanfic. One of my favorites, actually (I have three, one of them being Trigun 'Action!). I can't wait for another chapter, but I'm also dreading for this story to end. The writing style is great - lots of detail, and I am in awe of how well the characters are developed. After reading a few chapters, I started to see Midvalley in a whole new light. Great job! Keep up the good work (please). :) | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 21:20 CST
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YIKES!
What's going on! What's happening to Midvalley? I'm trying to make sense of it all, but how is his power making him sick?
I love how you wrote this chapter. I was a little hesitant about how the story will turn out once it starts to connect to the series. From my reading exprience, usually stories start to falter at 'connection' points. Not this one, not at all. Its still strictly Midvalley's point-of-view and it is flawlessly written. Love it.
I'm still sure that Legato is up to something. Quite a change of attitude towards Midvalley, don't you think? | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(low long whistle)
I love how you do dreams. Speaking as one, it's an illustrator's playground.
May City already? Man, time goes by really fast.
'trust McCoy like you would trust Legato.' (snicker) That says a lot right there. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 23:32 CST
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YIKES! No, this is worse than yikes, this is downright AAAAAAAAAA!
This chapter was hypnotizing. Heh, great to see those two back together again. Midvalley in a chartruese (spelling?) suit? Cool picture. Great chapter! A beautifully painted word-picture of love.
Boy, Legato does know how to make an appearance. Sheesh, it's like he slithers in like a snake, and then ccasionally charges in like an alligator. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 21:14 CST
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Ooooo the plot thickens.
I was beginning to get a little worried about the story getting a little more quiet, now that Nicholas is 'out of the picture". Nope. It's all the more intriquing.
Nice to see some of the 'humanity' in the "Academy" group. Know what I mean? Sorry about Caine, tragic. | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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