| "Midvalley's Serenade" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!
can't wait for next one!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: April 23, 2003 19:45 CDT
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Oh God. *rewatches episodes 18-24* OH GOD! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!! |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 04:57 CDT
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Knives? In...human public?
This could be interesting...
The meeting, though I cannot see Knives stooping so low to associate with humans, is brilliant. You really do capture him well. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 04:48 CDT
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Your writing, is again, amazingly powerful.
I don't think Knives would ever deign to rape a human, but the empathic connection that Midvalley picks up is highly believeable...I've read something done with Steve x Knives shotacon, and I think the entire situation is incredibly plausable...Steve was such a bastard... -.-
*waits impatiently for next chapter to load*
^^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 18:13 CDT
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I reviewed you at fanfic, but I wanted to review here too! This is by far my favorite Trigun fic I've ever read! Keep up the good work!
can't wait for next chapter!
:)gralnak |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm left on edge. Knives, Legato, with Midvalley. Ho boy, what a crowd. How will Midvalley feel about this? Both causes of his current pain in the same space? My goodness, I'd hate it. I'm proud of how he's taking all that had happened, and wanting to be honest with Nick. I hope he is.
Plus, I like how you write out Knives. He's a real leader. ;-) and a scary, iron firm one at that. You can tell just by looking and hearing him once that 'you DON'T fuck with him!' I'm impressed with Midvalley not being overly 'submissive'.
As always, good write. Most excellent. |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter. It opened so many doors! I liked how you made Knives so creepy yet charismatic and sure of himself. And I really liked how realistic Midvalley's reaction was to what he did with Legato. As always, the writing itself was great; especially the parts where it showed how uneasy everyone was when Knives was giving them their assignments. I think it's great, how you're practically writing a novel with this. I admire your determination.
On a scale of one to ten, this gets an eleven. ^^
-iMaxed |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 21:29 CST
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That. . .was. . .hot. Purely sensual (it ain't often you see Legato getting it.) . . .Wow. . .amazing. . . and, hoboy, is Midvalley going to get into trouble. I honestly don't think he did anything wrong, but. . . . I don't know, it's so technical. He wasn't in right mind, but still . . .it's not like he wouldn't have later. . .right?. . .yikes, what a dilemma. Either way, when Nick finds out . . Hell will break loose. |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaah, I love how you're going into such depth with Legato's character... in a lot of other stories, people portray him as just another evil villain, but that's definately not the case here. The detail in this chapter is exceptional... very good work. Though the ending was kind of depressing (Poor Midvalley!), I like it. It's believable. I look forward to more chapters concerning this Legato/Wolfwood/Midvalley triangle! And what's going to happen with Vash? o__o As always - fantastic job! :D |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 09:07 CST
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0_0 . . . .of all the things I could have read this early in the morning. Man, I'm gonna be feeling the blues all day.
That was so intense. Really intense. Flawlessly intense.
Did Hot Lips have any idea at all?
Man, I'm all a questions. What's going to happen now? Can I kill Knives? Speaking of the devil, I thought you did his character very well. |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 16:35 CST
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Great update! I was so surprised at what happened when Midvalley met Knives. It was so unexpected. XD The ending kind of scared me, too... I thought that's how you were going to end the story... I got frightened o__o. I think it was a good way to end the chapter, though. It reminded me of the dream Midvalley had a few chapters earlier... I'm really anticipating the next chapter! :D
-iMaxed |
Reviewed By: Pan Pingli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 01:21 CST
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Yay, you updated! ^_^ Just now, in fact! It freaked me out, because I was thinking I had only one more chapter to go. I love this story so much... it's so wonderful! I like Sister Rose, too. ^_~
Love,
Ping
PS: Sorry if you get a half posted review- my mouse skipped a beat when I hit enter and the page started to reload. ^^* |
Reviewed By: Pan Pingli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 01:19 CST
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Hey |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 15:09 CST
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AAA! :D What a romantic ending!
OK, back to seriousness. Man, this update has me in smiles. It's a delight. The children are so adorable. It's so cool to see what Nicholas has been working for. I hope Midvalley's plan carries through.
It's amazing how a child's innnocence can get you thinking, isn't it Midvalley.
I love Sister Rose. She's awesome. |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 18:28 CST
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Another spellbinding chapter.
Good job, Jexia... |
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