| "Midvalley's Serenade" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: amanda On: August 03, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this story! the foreshadowing is just perfect! legato is so creepy. well, you've written another really good chapter. i especially like how midvalley and nick have a special connection. im looking forward to more chapters. nick's time is almost up isnt it? oh midvalley is gonna be so sad! write more write more! |
Reviewed By: Sweet Insanity On: July 30, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God. This is just freakin' brilliant. It made me cry last night! ;__; Seriously. This is an amazing fic, the best one I've ever read. Please keep up the great work!
(PS. yes, I'm the same SI from anime palace, where I accendently wrote two reviews. ^_^;; sorry bout that.) |
Reviewed By: Novalda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as I hate to admit it, I've been reading this fiction almost from the beginning and have just now gotten off my lazy ass to post a comment! I shall now remedy that... First off, absolute kudos on choosing Midvalley to be your main character. Now, you can come by fic after fic revolving on Vash's feelings, less but still significant for Wolfwood, a few for Legato and maybe one or two for Knives is you're lucky, but I don't believe I've ever seen a fiction delve so deeply into Midvalley's psyche. That fact in itself makes it stand out from the crowd. Another is the sheer spectrum of emotion this fiction presents - when it's funny you laugh out loud, when it's happy you grin as wide as though your face may split in two; this characters are touching and moving... a key element that is sorely missed in the daily incoming deluge of new (and sadly unoriginal) fanfiction. Finally, MS has greatly enhanced the original timeline and fills in so many grey areas with a fresh, innovative way to interpret the Gung-ho Guns element of the Trigun story. Even though we may know how Trigun ends, this fiction makes it all new again. I was in tears at the tail end of "Bread of Heaven" because Wolfwood and Midvalley's love is so poignant, deep and true that you just can't help but wish them a happy ending. I don't think I can stress this enough - this is no typical fiction! You've got me hooked and I diligently scout for new chapters at any spare moment and will continue to do so. You are a truly gifted writer. |
Reviewed By: amanda On: July 11, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wolfwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!! oh my god this story is so so so so good! i love it!! i feel sorry for legato, kind of. knives is a jerk but everyone already knew that. i love how close nick and midvalley are! and how midvalley is 'obsessed with the priest' is so cute and i love it! i cant wait for more chapters! please please write more and write it fast! i love how you had forebodings in chapters about what's to befall nick and midvalley. this story is so good and wonderfully written and emotional and i hope you add more to it soon. |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 21:22 CDT
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I'm so glad I came home when I did. I get to read an awesome chapter.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow. . . . . .words cannot describe it. Better than I ever had or even could imagine. Stunned. Amazed. And oooooh the premonition about how near the ending is.
(I'd the overall rating a 15 if I could.) |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffhanger! (falls over) X_x
Wow! I'm never gonna see this section of the series the same way again. I knew events were somewhat orchestrated, but not THAT controlled. I thought Midvalley's observations of Vash were very 'nail on the forehead'.
"That wasn't in the script." (something like that) Pardon me as I snicker.
I am grateful for the fast and wonderful update.
Torrid City? Never heard of some of those names. Pardon me as I look them up. Carcusses, really? (sounds like a 'hard life in the desert' reference.) |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 19:58 CDT
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(the last time I tried to read this, the power went out. Now, I see why. It's dark.)
This one was great! Love the history about Legato: makes sense. Cannibalism? Yuck! Legato must be really drunk to go that deep. Please Bring Nick Back! Please Please Please! It's breaking my heart what happening to Midvalley! (hey, this might be a good thing.)
I relate to his writing the letter. It's so hard putting such emotion into words. Especially with all that's around. I hope the tear-stains (if there are any.) on the letter say enough. |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 06:40 CDT
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Wow. Next chapter I can tell you happy 40th!
This fic really is epic...
Certainly one of the best Trigun fics ever written.
Keep it up.
-k. |
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 21:28 CDT
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I've only read ch. 1 so far and really wish I had more time to read more. What a way to catch a person's attention and drag them into the story. Never had paid much mind to Midvalley in Trigun and already with this one chapter you've made him this fully realized human being and given to Wolfwood a vulnerability and strength that we've seen in the series. Beautiful. |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 14:18 CDT
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(It was a long journey getting here, and I'm not upset that I suffered it. The goal was worth it.)
CRUSH! That's the one word. CRUSH! Like a can in a recycling dumpster. And the thing that makes it worse is, Midvalley did it to himself (of course not intentionally.) $@^ Knives. Legato is. . . well. . .confusing in a curious manner. Just when it was all figured out, boom! new details. I'm beginning to think that he's a guy who just can't think for himself anymore. Heheh, I suppose 'rought f - king' can do that to someone.
Anyway, this read was great.
(Pardon me saying, but I'm impressed with Midvalley's self-control. Took him so long to resort to 'slippery M'. LOL and you know I'm joking.) |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm.org is working for me!
I love the new chapter keep it up!
:) |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouf, so much going on... I really like how much depth you're giving to Knives and Legato in the past two chapters. I'm really wondering as to how this is going to end! I hope that Midvalley sees Nick again, but I'm beginning to question if he will... o__O Very realistic reactions to things, like how Midvalley's compassion is making him tend to Legato, and how he's starting to become almost infatuated with him. Wonderful work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 02:43 CDT
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"I'd like to review some reports with you when Master Knives is finished with me," he began and then placed a thick stack of documents in my. I walked back to the office at headquarters, put aside my angry feelings and concentrated on my work. I started to leaf through the papers.
I'm guessing you meant 'in my hand', but left out the last word. I thought you might like to know about this. ^^;
-k. |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 18:51 CDT
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So sad, so beautiful, it was like Indigo Blue. It was a heavy clash of ideas: hope or hopelessness. Will 'Nick' ever return? And Legato: what can one think about him now?
Hehe, and Knives. If I was there giving the report, I couldn't help but chuckle. "It's nothing, really. You just remind me of a boy I once knew in High School." (And very likely he will kill me.) Not saying that your Knives was bad, o no. This is just a reaction of mine. |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! Chapter thirty-six was definately an intruiging one. I'm really interested in the chemistry between Legato and Knives. Hearing about how Midvalley's rape was planned was quite a surprise! The ending was very gripping and realistic... I feel bad for Midvalley. He's so overwhelmed! I'm really anxious to see how things turn out regarding his relationship with Nick... and what's going on with Nick and Vash, I wonder? Aah, so many questions! I guess we'll just have to read more to find the answers, which I am most certainly looking forward to. :D Good work! |
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