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 Title: My flabber is currently too gasted for me to make sense right now....
Reviewed By: Shardd the Spider  On: April 26, 2004 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. That was the best fan fiction ever. I... am in complete awe. Your style, your exquisite prose, my god, it's just totally blown me away! And your story telling- absolutely magnificent! . You'll have to excuse my somewhat pathetic shot at attempting to describe your, well, quite simply, masterpiece, but I fear not all of us are as gifted as you. It's just not everyday you find a really really goodpiece of literature. I don't usually leave reveiws on fanfics, but this one more than deserves it. You should be proud to be the creator of such a beautifully heart-wrenching story. Yours strangely Shardd the Spider P.S. Err... Not to sound desperate or anything but would there be any chance of another Midvalley/Wolfwood (or any other Midvalley pairing for that matter) story? *wink wink nudge nudge* I can pay! In cookies, see? *holds out cookies* Or doughnuts *holds up doughnuts* or.... Raspberry cheesecake! *eyes cheesecake* Maybe not the raspberry cheesecake. *I loved those scenes, but, DAMMIT, now I'll never be able to look at cheesecake (or bacon for that matter ;D)* *sighs* Ah well, I'd better go. But please, do us all a favour and just keep writing! Peace, Love and Paperclips, StS
 Reviewed By: sasha_hates_everyone@hotmail.com  On: October 20, 2003 07:51 CDT
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I don't know what to say. I'm sobbing... that was beautiful. He had a daughter... and the rest of his family lived. Beautiful...
 Reviewed By: Sweet Insanity  On: October 16, 2003 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy Christwagons! That is the best, best, BEST fic I have ever read. It was nothing short of amazing. I read the last chapter and the epologue last night and started bawling. I couldn't stop thinking about it last night. And I just read the epilogues again and started crying, and now my 3-year-old sister is asking me if I'm hurt. ^_^;; But MAN! This is the greatest thing ever. PLease, Please, PLEEEAAAASSSEE (!) Keep writing. Please? I love the MidvalleyXWolfwood pairing, and there aren't that many stories of this pairing out there. But of course, any pairing you write about will be great. ^________^ T___________T -SI
 Reviewed By: Jule [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
::applause:: ^_^ I've been following this fic for a while, but have been too lazy to write an actual review. I really don't know what to say. Excellent work from beginning to end. You've made me a Midvalley/Wolfwood shipper. XD Thanks for such an amazing fic.
 Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 06:39 CDT
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Many a tender affections to you, Jexia. You're welcome, my friend.
 Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's over. . . . . . wow, it's over. . . . . . o_o over. . . What an exit. It was flawless. I'm glad that Hot Lips hasn't died, like I assumed he would be. Really glad. And that chance to play music one more time. The exit wasn't empty, like I dreaded it would be. The ending was better than I ever imagined. Daughter?! Surprise! That's a blessing that I'm glad that Midvalley has realized before it was too late. And a very deep common understanding has now formed between them, Midvalley and Nick (referring to children). I'm glad that Midvalley was buried as well. And along side Nick. I always pictured him being cast aside like 'the garbage' that Knives referred to. Sad way to go. B flat. You definetly give that moment ALOT more meaning. Ho boy, this fic is really going to get me thinking about mortality. Human beings, we tear so easily. So why do we make ourselves to be iron?
 Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 01:30 CDT
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Last Call is hands down your BEST chapter that had cannon events in it. It is beautifully written, well carried out, and highly detailed. The story is over, and for that, I am truly sorry. This was one of my favorites ever. Honestly. It was beautifully written, well thought out, and emotionally charged. It certainly affected my outlook on a couple of the characters...I'll never look at Caine the same, now, that's for certain. ^^;;; At any rate, I hope this isn't the last thing we see from you out of the Trigun fandom, although I'm expecting you'll be taking a well deserved break. ^^ Good luck in all of your future writing. I hope one day you'll write the NicholasxVash version that you originally planned on... Ja~ne. Keep in touch. -k.
 Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 01:26 CDT
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Last Call is hands down your BEST chapter that had cannon events in it. It is beautifully written, well carried out, and highly detailed. The story is over, and for that, I am truly sorry. This was one of my favorites ever. Honestly. It was beautifully written, well thought out, and emotionally charged. It certainly affected my outlook on a couple of the characters...I'll never look at Caine the same, now, that's for certain. ^^;;; At any rate, I hope this isn't the last thing we see from you out of the Trigun fandom, although I'm expecting you'll be taking a well deserved break. ^^ Good luck in all of your future writing. I hope one day you'll write the NicholasxVash version that you originally planned on... Ja~ne. Keep in touch. -k.
 Reviewed By: viciouscallisto  On: October 13, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was beautifull. just...fucking...beautiful. i loved it. what can i say? it was amazing. how you wrote the characters...their feelings, actions...the storyline...just amazing. im completely blown away. the ending was so sad but so fitting. damn, now im mad at vash! the story was so good and now i'm so sad that its over! i loved it to death!!
 Reviewed By: sasha_hates_everyone@hotmail.com  On: October 11, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been meaning to write a glowing reiview for the longest time. I love this fic. Midvalley and Wolfwood were always my favorite pairing, and I was thrilled to see that someone had actually written a long fic. But this story has been just... so amazing. I love it, mainly because it gives such a better look at the story, by being told from a different point of view. Myself, I'd been dreading the chapter when the inevitable happened. But you did it so well, and I'm pleased that they got to see each other again. That doesn't make it any less sad... well, yes it does. I'll comment again, I, have and always will, enjoy this fic immensely. Midvalley is my all-time favorite anime character, and I love the depth you've added, that you don't see enough of in the series. Thank you, -pretty hate machine
 Reviewed By: Sweet Insanity  On: October 02, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my god, oh my god...tears are pouring out of my eyes...that was so sad, but beautiful... Holy Shit. You are an amazing writer....I can't stop crying!
 Title: T_T
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 01, 2003 20:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffle* I'd be in tears if my roommate wasn't also in the room. I'll start bawling in a few minutes, yes I will. That was so powerful. Nick. Midvalley. *sniffle* It finally happened. He's dead. I don't believe it. It happened. Seen it coming since the beginning, but it's still hard to swallow. I love the pacing you've done with the coffee. Between Midvalley and Legato. And the scene in the bar, I found that to be so sad. Midvalley could never play for an audience again, because there will always be someone out there who will know. What kind of a life for him is that? It's like he has nothing left at all. I'm glad that Midvalley and Nick got to see each other one last time before he died. I guess there's not much left now, is there? And you beat me in the race! Well, I tried.
 Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2003 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think Nick recognized Zazie. I'm so glad someone else actually SAW that moment. I have different reasons for it in the 'universe' I write from, but nevertheless, there was a LOOK on Wolfwood's face when he saw Zazie. He recognized the boy. I'm just glad I'm not the only over-obsessed freak-girl who saw that look. ^^;;!! As for everything else, I think you've continued to do an amazing job. Things are winding down to the inevitable close that we all know about...I'm not looking forward to it...I'm far to addicted to this epic of yours...I'll be interested to see the other version if you ever get to it, since I know what was intended when you started this thing. Good luck, and may the rest be as good as the beginning... Ja~ -k.
 Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2003 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another impressive dream scene. The emotions in this chapter are well executed. I expected nothing less from this reunion. You've left me satisfied for the night... Except that there are two chapters left. TWO CHAPTERS...Eek. I can't walk away until it's all read...*goes insane* -k.
 Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2003 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
You've done a good job getting the pair back together ^^. I'm so far behind here...@_@ Anyway, this, and a quick note to the group are all I have had time for since the con. I go read more now. *hug* *flee* -k.
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