| "Until Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: amazed
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 23:45 CST
Comment/Review:
It's been awhile now, and still no update? I want update!!!
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 18:41 CDT
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This is good!!! Frist time on lemon? I can't believe you said that!!! frist time? you wrote like an expert !!! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more i want MORE!!!! plz plz plz update soon! i like the story plot and stuff!!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 02, 2004 04:41 CST
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Hope you haven't forgotten about this.
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Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: May 10, 2003 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've really got my interest in the prologue there... good lemon too! Hope you'll consider picking this up again! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 10, 2003 21:49 CDT
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Don't abandon the idea, keep going!!! |
Reviewed By: a fallen angel in blue (FAB) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! this is good, i like it, i want more, pleaseeeeeee!!!!! you picked up my interest. |
Reviewed By: Amora On: October 03, 2002 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea and the beginning
but u got ta finish it |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: September 18, 2002 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
liked it can't wait for next chapter. update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
COMe on!!!
don't stop like that |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 08:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this, please continue. |
Reviewed By: Kewla On: September 13, 2002 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon.
Waiting........ |
Reviewed By: kittykat88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter that was great I'm definantly adding this story to my FAV'S. Please I beg you continue! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 13, 2002 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well you've got my curiosity going. Are they going to wish to be saiyans? Guess I'll have to wait to find out. Good job. |
